Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Unidentified Human bounty hunter (Upper City)

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Unidentified Human bounty hunter (Upper City)

Clean. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 18:14, October 18, 2010 (UTC)
You'll be giving Soresu a run for his money soon. NAYAYEN 22:53, October 18, 2010 (UTC)
Excellent. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is the truth)} 01:45, October 19, 2010 (UTC)
Great job.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 01:52, October 19, 2010 (UTC)
Here, take these credits (: --Tm_T^(Talk) 19:25, October 20, 2010 (UTC)
JangFett ^(Talk) 16:41, October 24, 2010 (UTC)
1358 ^(Talk) 14:29, October 25, 2010 (UTC)
Oooh, you outta time, baby! Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:06, October 26, 2010 (UTC)

~~In the intro, you say this bounty hunter and some other bounty hunter were trying to extort credits from a merchant, but they were killed. Why were they killed/why did the merchant needed "rescuing"?~~
- Clarified.
"Cornering the man in the Upper City, the two bounty hunters tried to force him to pay" Pay what? Credits?
- Obviously. Fixed.
Watch your linking as well. JangFett ^(Talk) 21:00, October 19, 2010 (UTC)
- Will do. Thanks for the review. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 18:49, October 20, 2010 (UTC)

IIRC Revan was not aware of his real identity at the time of the incident with this being. Shouldn't it be reflected by the text? Like: "...witnessed by a Galactic Republic soldier,—the mindwiped Revan—who..." or something alike. Darth Morrt 05:39, October 20, 2010 (UTC)
- Nah. I think that's just extraneous info not really relevant to this particular article. Whether he remembered this or not, he was still Revan. I'd prefer not to discuss his amnesia in articles, unless it had any bearing on the encounter. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 18:49, October 20, 2010 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 20:06, October 26, 2010 (UTC)

Can I ask what your graphics setting are? SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 01:45, October 19, 2010 (UTC)
- I have everything set on maximum. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 14:08, October 19, 2010 (UTC)
I changed infobox era link to actual era, check if you're happy with it. (: --Tm_T^(Talk) 19:25, October 20, 2010 (UTC)
- That's fine. Actually, that was supposed to be linked to the Old Republic era in the first place, but I overlooked it. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 19:46, October 20, 2010 (UTC)