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Unidentified Human barfly

  • Nominated by: graestan(talk) 20:11, February 1, 2012 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Too long, yet again.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote JangFett (Talk) 03:48, February 3, 2012 (UTC)
  2. Awful pick-up lines for the win. Trak Nar Ramble on 05:20, February 4, 2012 (UTC)
  3. Assuming Cal Jedi is satisfied. Hanzo Hasashi 05:23, February 4, 2012 (UTC)
  4. ACvote I find this article's midi-chlorian count adequate. 1358 (Talk) 18:42, February 10, 2012 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Well, Grae said she wanted a date. I asked. No. She wanted some worthless bounty hunter....—Cal JediInfinite Empire (Personal Comm Channel) 05:17, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Object

God awful dialogue
  • Since the title is conjecture, could you please bold a statement that reflects her name in the intro? I.e, a young Human or something of that sort?
    • The things we miss when rusty. Got it. graestan(talk) 21:34, February 1, 2012 (UTC)
      • Yeah. :P I don't know if you remember, but we avoid linking in bold letters in the intro. Of course I would've corrected this myself, but I'm not sure what you wanted to bold. JangFett (Talk) 21:43, February 1, 2012 (UTC)
        • I don't remember it, and it's not in the rules anywhere, so I am assuming it's a trend which has sprung up more recently. But I have the talent to sachet around it. Done. graestan(talk) 03:49, February 2, 2012 (UTC)
  • Infobox: Was there proof or anything said that claims she was a criminal? I don't actually recall this.
    • Didn't notice that; was there when I came in. Fixed. graestan(talk) 21:34, February 1, 2012 (UTC)
  • Could you please source the TCW episode's airdate? IIRC, IMDB or the Star Wars calendar on the official site lists it. The episode guides are now useless. JangFett (Talk) 21:12, February 1, 2012 (UTC)
    • Got it. Thanks for the update on that. graestan(talk) 21:34, February 1, 2012 (UTC)
  • Just to let you know, Grae, we source any TCW event to the Star Wars Annual 2011 magazine. That magazine does list various battles taking place in 21 BBY, but if it's not confirmed, any "around 21 BBY" is sourced to it. I took care of this in the article for you, though. :) JangFett (Talk) 21:10, February 1, 2012 (UTC)
    • Thanks and thanks for the review. graestan(talk) 21:34, February 1, 2012 (UTC)
Return of the Jedi
  • You should probably add who she was talking to in her quotes, especially the first one.
    • She was talking to herself in the first one, so I left that alone since it's implicit as soon as you read the intro. Added the second. graestan(talk) 05:12, February 4, 2012 (UTC)
  • No quote for the P & T? From the way the article sounds, she had more than two quotes.—Cal JediInfinite Empire (Personal Comm Channel) 22:06, February 3, 2012 (UTC)
    • One more quote: "What's the big deal?" I decided against adding this to the article because it would require more lines from Hardeen or explanation in the attribution, which is goofy on a tiny article like this where you can read what was said easily without searching. graestan(talk) 05:12, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 05:18, February 11, 2012 (UTC)


  • I had DVRed the episode and as I was watching I couldn't help but research why this woman had a misconception as to what "checking his midi-chlorian count" means. Nothing funny, alas. graestan(talk) 20:11, February 1, 2012 (UTC)