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Unidentified Human Sith Lord

  • Nominated by: —Jedi Kasra (comlink) 01:57, July 4, 2012 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: "They won't work… for a freak…"

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. —MJ— Holocomm Wednesday, July 4, 2012, 03:38 UTC
  2. ACvote—Cal JediInfinite Empire (Personal Comm Channel) 20:21, July 5, 2012 (UTC)
  3. --LelalMekha (talk) 20:23, July 5, 2012 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 19:36, July 17, 2012 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote Menkooroo (talk) 02:14, July 19, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Cav
  • An individual was a Human male Sith - I think just saying a "A Human male Sith" would be a lot better here.
  • The quote in the PT says he had killed Jedi before, but this is not reflected in the article.- Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 13:54, July 9, 2012 (UTC)
    • Placed in the P&A. I added the fact that he was a Sith Lord due to Jan Duursema's comment here. Please advise if anything else is required.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 16:34, July 9, 2012 (UTC)
Ferg
  • Good job with the {{WebCite}} template. Can you fill out the |work field, though? "Dark Horse Message Boards" would be appropriate there. Helps pinpoint from where the post comes. Also the |date field, where you can indicate the date and time that Jan posted her comment. It's a really useful field for citing forum posts.
  • I don't think ref [6] is appropriate for dating the Evacuation of Dac at 137 ABY. That dating actually runs contrary to the trade paperback and is based on its concurrence with Operation: Thunderstroke. Maybe just cite issue 47 for the 137 ABY date and call it a day?
  • In the intro: No linking in the bolded title! A-ha!
  • "After the Dark Lord of the Sith Darth Wyyrlok ordered the execution of the Final Protocol against the planet Dac—which had been poisoned by Sith scientist Vul Isen" the "had" in there makes it seem like Isen poisoned it before the Final Protocol. Can you reword?
  • If he killed numerous Jedi before meeting Cade, it should probably be noted at the beginning of his bio. Great job! Menkooroo (talk) 03:03, July 18, 2012 (UTC)
    • Believe I got 'em all, please advise if anything else is required.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 07:58, July 18, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 02:14, July 19, 2012 (UTC)