Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Unidentified First Order stormtrooper (Thunderer's hangar)

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Unidentified First Order stormtrooper (Thunderer's hangar)

Nominated by: CometSmudge (talk) 19:24, 28 November 2024 (UTC)
Nomination comments:
Date Archived: 03:41, 16 December 2024 (UTC)
Final word count: 356 words (71 introduction, 240 body, 45 behind the scenes)
Word count at nomination time: 336 words (71 introduction, 220 body, 45 behind the scenes)
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FIRST OFF: Welcome to Team Colossus :): Some links that I think are missing Unidentified AAL-1971/9.1 Troop Transport, F-11D blaster rifle, Unidentified maneuver (Jarek Yeager) (Maybe (sneaked)) NBDani (they/them)^{Yeager's Repairs} 20:16, 28 November 2024 (UTC)
~~I think Jace Rucklin's designation of DT-798 should be squeezed in and used in place of his name. NBDani (they/them)^{Yeager's Repairs} 20:16, 28 November 2024 (UTC)~~
I'd like to see this sentence "The Thunderer was destroyed soon after." expanded to involve the Battle of Barabesh. As it reads now, it could be inferred the shuttle's explosion lead to Thunderer's destruction. I think it best to mention the battle took place soon afterwards, resulting in the Star Destroyer's destruction. NBDani (they/them)^{Yeager's Repairs} 20:16, 28 November 2024 (UTC)
~~I think "voiced by" should be changed to "credited to" NBDani (they/them)^{Yeager's Repairs} 20:16, 28 November 2024 (UTC)~~
- Addressed all CometSmudge (talk) 00:04, 29 November 2024 (UTC)
~~The intro specifies that Tam defected, but the body only accuses her. NBDani (they/them)^{Yeager's Repairs} 13:27, 2 December 2024 (UTC)~~
- Tweaked it CometSmudge (talk) 02:43, 6 December 2024 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 03:41, 16 December 2024 (UTC)