Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Unidentified Chalhuddan youngling

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Contents

  • 1 Unidentified Chalhuddan youngling
    • 1.1 (3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 Anil
        • 1.1.2.2 Panther
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Unidentified Chalhuddan youngling

  • Nominated by: —spookywillowwtalk 03:47, 12 December 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Figured it'd be worth putting the email to use. Love a good LPOA tie-in.
  • Date Archived: 00:06, 18 December 2023 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 500 words (64 introduction, 299 body, 137 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:NOVELSWP:PRIDE

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. ACvote Lewisr (talk) 04:06, 12 December 2023 (UTC)
  2. ACvote TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 14:45, 14 December 2023 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Fan26 (Talk) 03:35, 17 December 2023 (UTC)
  4. Panther436 (talk) 19:35, 17 December 2023 (UTC)
  5. Booply (talk) 00:04, 18 December 2023 (UTC)

Object

Anil
  • Do you think the Chalhuddan language warrants its own article? TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 00:23, 14 December 2023 (UTC)
    • Stubbed and linked.—spookywillowwtalk 02:47, 14 December 2023 (UTC)
Panther
  • I think the attribution of the main quote needs a slight indication of what they're talking about (even if it's just "Anakin's speech" or something), just because it's the first thing on the article and the quote is very unspecific.
  • I'm not sure, but it seems like the second sentence of the biography's second paragraph mistakenly refers to Anakin as a Padawan because no Padawan character has been established in the article by that point. Panther436 (talk) 18:16, 17 December 2023 (UTC)
    • Should've gotten both, and yep the latter was a quick mistake to swap out.—spookywillowwtalk 19:25, 17 December 2023 (UTC)

Comments

  • Not an objection but just a personal preference: I feel like an image of Anakin or the Jedi Temple would be more relevant than the Jedi emblem. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 00:23, 14 December 2023 (UTC)
    • Good point, slipped in.—spookywillowwtalk 02:47, 14 December 2023 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 00:05, 18 December 2023 (UTC)