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Unidentified Bith scientist

  • Nominated by: OLIOSTER (talk) 21:47, November 8, 2010 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:Spoiler: G0-T0 IS A DROID!

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. I'll support this nomination if I can. MasterJedi15 21:56, November 8, 2010 (UTC)MasterJedi15
  2. ACvote I would like to meet this woman.[src] 1358 (Talk) 21:59, November 13, 2010 (UTC)
  3. —Jedi Kasra (comlink) 01:48, November 24, 2010 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:38, November 29, 2010 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote --Eyrezer 20:54, December 3, 2010 (UTC)

Object

I can smell the objections!
  • Any reason why 'Pale Yellow' is capitalized like that? It seems that yellow should be decapitalized, huh?
  • Could you start the introduction a bit differently? He wasn't a scientist, he worked as one, if you know what I mean.
    • Clarified that he worked as a scientist. OLIOSTER (talk) 20:33, November 13, 2010 (UTC)
  • Context on the Exile, please?
    • Noted that she was a former Jedi Knight. OLIOSTER (talk) 20:33, November 13, 2010 (UTC)
  • "…to which the Exile offered her assistance." Err, she offered assistance to the moon?
  • Article for the Twi'lek?
    • Per our discussing in IRC, this isn't needed. OLIOSTER (talk) 20:33, November 13, 2010 (UTC)
      • Per even further discussion, just went ahead and made it and added it to the article. OLIOSTER (talk) 21:12, November 13, 2010 (UTC)
  • Context on G0-T0?
    • Added that he was the Exchange leader
  • Onto the article body… I like his head.
  • Again, context on the Exile.
    • Same as above, added former Jedi Knight. OLIOSTER (talk) 20:33, November 13, 2010 (UTC)
  • Why did the Exile visit him? /me is not familiar with KOTOR
    • No specific reason, just one of the many random NPCs around the docks who will give you quests. I added that she was exploring the docks when she met him, is this sufficient? OLIOSTER (talk) 20:33, November 13, 2010 (UTC)
  • Too much 'he' in the first paragraph of the bio.
    • Replaced a few of them with "The scientist" and "The Bith". OLIOSTER (talk) 20:33, November 13, 2010 (UTC)
  • Again, article for the dead guy?
  • You need to give these guys context, man! Who is this G0-T0 fella again?
    • Same as above, Exchange leader blah blah blah. OLIOSTER (talk) 20:33, November 13, 2010 (UTC)
  • I'm sure you could have a P&T.
  • "This" in the Bts sounds a bit strange—that word can be a bit OOUish. Perhaps "The Bith scientist" or something like that could be better?
  • I'll read through it one more time after these have been fixed. 1358 (Talk) 20:09, November 13, 2010 (UTC)
  • "A former Jedi Knight, the Jedi Exile, was exploring the Nar Shaddaa Docks and met the scientist in his room on the Nar Shaddaa Docks." Too many docks!
  • No {{ref}} tags in the body, please.
  • That is all! 1358 (Talk) 21:52, November 13, 2010 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • The infobox death field should be supplemented with a reference that actually verifies his death. The KOTOR Campaign Guide does not in itself state that this character died in 3,951 BBY.
  • This is rather trivial BTS information. I would suggest perhaps trying to find a way to insert this into the P/T instead: "While Nar Shaddaa is technically a moon, the Bith refers to it as a planet." Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:14, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 20:56, December 3, 2010 (UTC)