Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Unidentified Aqualish bounty hunter (Upper City)

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Unidentified Aqualish bounty hunter (Upper City)

  • Nominated by: QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 19:29, October 22, 2010 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: The Aqualish should really stop saying that they (or their boss) "doesn't like" something or someone. This leads to unfortunate consequences.

(3 ACs/5 Users/8 Total)

Support

  1. Clone Commander Lee Talk 14:05, October 23, 2010 (UTC)
  2. I don't like you either! ~ SavageBob 02:23, October 30, 2010 (UTC)
  3. OLIOSTER (talk) 22:08, November 8, 2010 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:46, November 10, 2010 (UTC)
  5. Provided Grae's and Xd's objections are fixed.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 03:54, November 13, 2010 (UTC)
  6. ACvote 1358 (Talk) 19:36, November 13, 2010 (UTC)
  7. ACvote Grunny (talk) 09:36, November 14, 2010 (UTC)
  8. Graestan(Talk) 01:30, November 18, 2010 (UTC)

Object

Graestan
  1. Normally this would be a "{{sofixit}}" but I want to point out that phrases like "this Aqualish" are written from an OOU point of view as opposed to the IU standard, and don't belong.
    • Addressed.
  2. Are we calling it "the Upper City" or simply "Upper City?" Please fix whichever one is incorrect. Graestan(Talk) 23:29, November 10, 2010 (UTC)
Xd1358
  • Just one nitpicky one: "However, Revan killed the two and rescued the merchant." This sounds like they first killed the two and then rescued the merchant. However, didn't Revan rescue the merchant by killing the two? I think "However, Revan killed the two, rescuing the merchant." would be better. 1358 (Talk) 20:50, November 12, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 02:20, November 18, 2010 (UTC)