Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Ulicia

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Ulicia

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. Fan26 (Talk) 20:08, January 27, 2019 (UTC)
  2. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 11:59, January 29, 2019 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Rockin' the suburbs. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 00:40, March 14, 2019 (UTC)
  4. ACvote MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 02:38, March 15, 2019 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:43, March 16, 2019 (UTC)

Object

Fan
  • Would the commex corp. need to be listed in the infobox, considering that their headquarters are located on the world? Fan26 (Talk) 19:49, January 27, 2019 (UTC)
    • Question answered via IRC. Fan26 (Talk) 20:08, January 27, 2019 (UTC)
QGJ
  • Positioned near the planet Abo Dreth,[4] the hyperlane known as the Shaltin Tunnels linked Ulicia to the Atchorb system, while another hyperlane linked it to the Abo Dreth and Perin systems. What was positioned near Abo Dreth, Ulicia or the hyperlane? The sentence currently makes it sound like its the latter.
  • The Atlas gives the grid coordinates for systems, not planets. The Bts should be expanded to reflect that. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 12:30, January 28, 2019 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • Does the Atlas refer to this hyperlane in any text, or are you just getting it from the map? "...while another hyperlane linked the planet to the Abo Dreth and Perin systems."
  • What area is this? Please be more specific: "...which had struggled to develop in that area."
  • Also, what does "develop" mean in that sentence?
    • To satisfy the two objections above, I've moved that bit to the Description section, and made a minor change to clarify its meaning.
      • I'm not sure that's the best option. It doesn't fit well where it is now in the Description, because the article ends up mentioning the CSA before even establishing what the Corporate Sector itself is. More importantly, CSA regional development has more to do with historical events than anything. I would rather see the article place that mention at the end of the first History sentence. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 04:20, March 13, 2019 (UTC)
        • I've kinda included it in that first History sentence. How does it look? TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 20:30, March 13, 2019 (UTC)
  • I understand why you included this sentence in the article, since the Atlas mentions Ulicia in this context, but this isn't actually relevant to Ulicia itself. What's relevant to Ulicia in that sentence is the understanding that it's the last stop on the Shaltin Tunnels hyperlane before leaving CSA borders and entering Wild Space. That's what you should work into the Description section, and this sentence can just be removed: "For their operations in Trianii Space and Wild Space beyond Ulicia, CSA military units used the planet Atchorb as a staging point." Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 04:28, March 12, 2019 (UTC)
    • Addressed. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 19:09, March 12, 2019 (UTC)
      • On second thought, I think we should mention that it was the last stop on the other unnamed hyperlane as well. The Atlas says "for their operations in Trianii Space and Wild Space beyond Ulicia," and as you can see on the map, one of them leads to Trianni Space, with the other leading to Wild Space. What do you think? TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 03:08, March 13, 2019 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 08:44, March 16, 2019 (UTC)