Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Ugor/Legends

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Ugor

(+5)

Support

  1. -- AckbarSigdmirableAckbar (It's A Trap!) 19:07, 30 August 2007 (UTC)
  2. Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 13:10, 31 August 2007 (UTC)
  3. supergeeky1 BobaFett The Cantina 21:46, 13 September 2007 (UTC)
  4. --Goodwood 20:59, 14 September 2007 (UTC)
  5. --Domlith 15:20, 23 September 2007 (UTC)

Oppose

  1. From the Forest of Goodwood
    • Grammatical error in opening quote.
      • Fixed.
    • Prose issues in the introduction; "various shapes and positions because they had one single cell" needs to be rewritten.
    • Addressed.
    • Grammatical issue with the first paragraph of "Biology". The second sentence needs to be tweaked.
      • Addressed.
    • "because of the speed the exuded pseudopodia" needs to be rephrased.
      • Addressed.
    • In general, correct grammar needs to be applied to the uses of the proper name "Ugor" in the article, particularly in the possessive forms.
      • Addressed, I think, though I may have missed a few; I had to do it twice thanks to my beloved internet connection.
    • An overall prose readjustment wouldn't go amiss, but it's a good article, generally-speaking.--Goodwood 22:49, 10 September 2007 (UTC)

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