Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Tuzes-Adaz (second nomination)

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Tuzes-Adaz

  • Nominated by: MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 23:29, September 24, 2018 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Now that I'm back from vacation and have a new computer, let's finish this.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. Fan26 (Talk) 02:21, September 25, 2018 (UTC)
  2. Second time's the charm. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 10:52, September 25, 2018 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 16:26, September 28, 2018 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Exiled Jedi (talk) 23:16, September 29, 2018 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:31, October 6, 2018 (UTC)

Object

Fan26

Everything looks really good-the only thing I noticed was no audio for quotes-given that this is from one of the TV shows, would it be possible for you to get an audio file for some of them? Fan26 (Talk) 23:55, September 24, 2018 (UTC)

  • Audio files aren't really required, but I can see what I can do. MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 00:30, September 25, 2018 (UTC)
    • If it's not required than don't worry to much about it-I'm relatively new to the whole status article scene and from what I've seen audio files seem to be present often, but not always, and so I just made the leap to thinking they were encouraged. If you can find them, great, but if not, it's fine. I'm gonna go ahead and strike this so it doesn't block the GA in the future by virtue of just still being open. Fan26 (Talk) 00:46, September 25, 2018 (UTC)
      • Encouraged, for sure. I'll see if I can get some, because that'd definitely be cool. MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 01:24, September 25, 2018 (UTC)
        • Okay then. I'll strike it now-In my mind, this constitutes dealing with the objection-and great job, by the way. Animated Clone Wars was better than most people give it credit for. Fan26 (Talk) 02:21, September 25, 2018 (UTC)
QGJ
  • I am not a fan of linking to her eldest son in this sentence. Tuzes-Adaz was a Nelvaanian female who had multiple sons I think it should be linked when you actually start talking about that specific son.
  • Looking at how the bio is formatted in Oasis, I think it would be better to split it into three paragraphs. Also the image needs to be moved a bit down, so it illustrates the relevant scene described in the text.
  • AFAIK, the creature was not identified as a horax in the episode. I think an external ref would be nice.
  • In the intro, I think it's better to establish the deity by its name.
  • Ref 4 should mention Tuzes-Adaz by name, instead of adressing her as "she" or "her". QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 06:39, September 25, 2018 (UTC)
    • I believe these all should be handled now. MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 06:54, September 25, 2018 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • I don't understand the meaning of this sentence exactly: "She also wore a large shield-like armband of the same colors with the design of a face drawn on the front." From the description, I can only interpret that to mean the tribal shield mask she carries/wears, but the article's description of it being a "shield-like armband" doesn't seem quite accurate. Maybe just changing the wording to explain it as a tribal shield mask would suffice. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 14:58, September 27, 2018 (UTC)
    • You're right, "shield mask" is a much better term. Fixed. MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 23:26, September 27, 2018 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 16:49, October 7, 2018 (UTC)