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Turret Room

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:50, May 26, 2019 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Yet more TPM goodness

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. Fan26 (Talk) 11:53, May 29, 2019 (UTC)
  2. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 17:33, June 4, 2019 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:25, June 6, 2019 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Tommy Imperial Emblem Macaroni 07:19, June 7, 2019 (UTC)
  5. ACvote MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 21:52, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Object

Fan
  • "The Turret Room and attached temple were built by King Jafan, the first ruler of Naboo's Great Time of Peace, with the temple coming to be used by the monarchs of the Royal House of Naboo to honor the great rulers of the past" I think this could be split into two sentences, one about Jafan and the construciton, one about the temple's usage. Fan26 (Talk) 03:15, May 29, 2019 (UTC)
QGJ
  • Should it be "Turret Room" or "Turret room?" There is at least one instance of it being spelled lowercase.
  • Do canon sources not capitalize the terms "Padawan" (when used by itself without a subject) and "the Council?" The quote capitalizes the term Padawan, but the article does not, only when it's followed by a name. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 07:54, May 31, 2019 (UTC)
    • Addressed all the capitalization issues so they're consistent with canon sources. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:10, May 31, 2019 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • It certainly sounds to me from the audio file that Yoda says "But agree with your taking..."
  • Is it "Royal Palace" or "royal palace"? The infobox and article body are not consistent.
    • Changed to consistently be Royal Palace. Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:12, June 3, 2019 (UTC)
  • Theed being the "capital" city is intro-exclusive.
  • Do we really need this elaborate description of the exact position and angle of each chair in the second paragraph of the Description section? Can we not just simply say the room was furnished with several chairs and a table, etc.?
    • To be honest I wasn't certain quite how detailed to be, I found it interesting working out the layout of the whole room, since there's no shot that shows all of it at the same time, but if you think it's not relevant I can remove it. I'd say that at the very least the three separate groups of chairs should be referenced, although perhaps not their specific positions relevant to one another. Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:12, June 3, 2019 (UTC)
      • Go ahead and parse down how you feel is best, and I'll see what I think of it. That will probably be the easiest thing here. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 00:33, June 3, 2019 (UTC)
        • How does it look now? Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:24, June 5, 2019 (UTC)
          • I'm fine with the text. The reduction of that section makes the images a little more squeezed, so I changed their positions and reduced the thumbnail size for the exterior shot, which I think helps it look a little bit better. Otherwise the section headers are being pushed. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:23, June 5, 2019 (UTC)
  • The name "Turret Room" originated somewhere in Legends, probably the novelization, which should be detailed in the BTS. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 23:51, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 21:52, June 7, 2019 (UTC)