Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Turazza

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Turazza

  • Nominated by: Skippy Farlstendoiro 04:19, June 30, 2010 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: WP:AS presents a guest collaboration in WP:DarkStryder. Meet Huey, Dewey and Louie!

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. Inqvote Nice. --Eyrezer 00:11, July 16, 2010 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Chack Jadson (Talk) 14:36, July 18, 2010 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Extra points for using the word "meep". Also DarkStryder? Seems interesting. I wonder if I should read it at all? Hmmm .... - Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 10:44, July 20, 2010 (UTC)
  4. SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is a lie) 05:21, July 21, 2010 (UTC)
  5. Menkooroo 15:02, July 24, 2010 (UTC)

Object

Eyrezer
  • I feel there is a little bit of unnecessary repetition. For instance, the B&A, History and TitG all contain info on the value given to Turazza eggs. Can you consolidate this info? Perhaps the Galliwag info can be placed in the TitG section where you talk about Loh'kar getting the eggs for payment.
  • Can you add something to the B&A about the teeth and hands? --Eyrezer 01:45, July 9, 2010 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • At least one unsourced item in the infobox.
  • I would also recommend finding a way to alternate the images in the article. This may require you to shrink their sizing. Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:46, July 20, 2010 (UTC)
    • Quite subjective as it is a design thing. Better now? --Skippy Farlstendoiro 16:01, July 21, 2010 (UTC)
      • It's actually quite the opposite of subjective. From Wookieepedia's Layout Guide, concerning images: Images should typically alternate from the right-side to the left-side. If there is a long infobox at the start, multiple images can be left aligned until the infobox ends. Please familiarize yourself with our article formatting guidelines. Toprawa and Ralltiir 00:04, July 23, 2010 (UTC)
  • Please find a replacement quote for the article's History section, or otherwise please remove it. From Wookieepedia's Manual of Style, concerning quotes: A quote is NOT: 1. Narrative prose that is not actual spoken dialogue or a character's personal memoirs, journal, or diary. This means that thoughts are not considered quotable material. Toprawa and Ralltiir 00:28, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 17:25, July 27, 2010 (UTC)


Thanks to SavageBob & MasterJonathan for their help, and of course to CavalierOne of WP:DarkStryder for allowing this intrusion in his turf.