Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Tumble Bunny

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Contents

  • 1 Tumble Bunny
    • 1.1 (3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 Spooky
        • 1.1.2.2 Braha
        • 1.1.2.3 Ayrehead
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Tumble Bunny

  • Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 21:36, 4 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:EWOKS

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. Fan26 (Talk) 00:42, 7 March 2022 (UTC)
  2. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 08:22, 23 March 2022 (UTC)
  3. ACvote I don't love the way the hyphens after the colours look in the description but turns out that's grammatically correct Commander Code-8 Hello There! 01:21, 22 April 2022 (UTC)
  4. ACvote 1358 (Talk) 19:13, 22 April 2022 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:51, 25 April 2022 (UTC)

Object

Spooky
  • Just for consistency, rabbit is intro-exclusive at the moment (other mentions are as bunny).
    • Added.
  • "In 3 ABY, during the annual carnival, the Tumble Bunny show was present, with their trainer wearing a costume that imitated the bunnies' tale and ears." Was it meant to be "tail" or was it storytelling, was hard to determine if it was a pun for fun slipped in.—spookywillowwtalk 20:19, 10 March 2022 (UTC)
    • Yeah meant to be tail, fixed. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 21:42, 10 March 2022 (UTC)
Braha
  • I think the carnival is worth naming in the article. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 23:37, 22 March 2022 (UTC)
    • It's conjectural, albeit at a dumb name. I keep meaning to move it. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 23:44, 22 March 2022 (UTC)
      • Ah, very well. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 08:22, 23 March 2022 (UTC)
Ayrehead
  • Based on our bunny page it seems to only cover the specific anthropomorphic sentient species, and I'm not sure how this page is differentiating between bunny and rabbit given that the former is generally just an informal term for rabbit. I'd probably recommend just removing the references to bunny entirely. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:46, 25 April 2022 (UTC)
    • Heh didn't realize that, done.
  • The biology and appearances section should cover their facial features. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:46, 25 April 2022 (UTC)
    • Done.
  • Instead of linking to them in the quote captions I think it'd be better to mention the Ewoks by name in the body so there's context for them. Currently there's no way to know if they're the woklings or the friends you talk about. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:46, 25 April 2022 (UTC)
    • Fair point, done. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:22, 25 April 2022 (UTC)

Comments

  • Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 17:51, 25 April 2022 (UTC)