Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Tulvaree

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Tulvaree

  • Nominated by: ~ SavageBob 05:29, May 29, 2010 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Who knew that our own Farl could be so ruthless?

(4 ACs/3 Users/7 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote I'll live with the small paragraphs. Chack Jadson (Talk) 16:07, May 30, 2010 (UTC)
  2. Flying squirrels on steroids. NAYAYEN:TALK 16:54, May 31, 2010 (UTC)
  3. -- 1358 (Talk) 17:33, May 31, 2010 (UTC)
  4. Well, you know how it goes. I was young, and darksided, and Jean Giraud designed my wardrobe... Nothing I like to talk about. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 06:50, June 1, 2010 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote --Eyrezer 01:55, June 4, 2010 (UTC)
  6. Inqvote Neat. Graestan(Talk) 02:43, June 9, 2010 (UTC)
  7. ACvote JangFett (Talk) 02:47, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Object

Nayayen
  • Just one: "Due to the species' natural talons and fangs, Tulvaree wars that could be quite deadly." Do you mean to say "...wars that escalated could..." or is the "that" not meant to be there? An interesting read otherwise. NAYAYEN:TALK 12:06, May 31, 2010 (UTC)
    • Typo; fixed. Thanks for the review! ~ SavageBob 16:49, May 31, 2010 (UTC)
All hail Farl, farlmerly known as the Conqueror
  • The last sentence of the intro, I think, describes the culture and should go before explaining their history and contact with the Conqueror. What do you think?
  • Consider the following linking: Music, language, scout (profession)|explorers, regiment
  • History: 2nd paragraph says "Farl and his pirates reach Pochi". 3rd paragraph says "Tulvarees learned from them". How was their contact? Did they fight? Did they trade? What happened?
  • As the Child Conqueror is so important for the Tulvaree civilization, you might want to mention (and source) his grim end.
  • Skippy Farlstendoiro 13:21, May 31, 2010 (UTC)
    • All should be addressed. Thanks for pointing out that Faarl and the Tulvarees got mentioned in the Insider article; I had no idea! ~ SavageBob 16:49, May 31, 2010 (UTC)
Eyrezer
  • Any chance of a small crop of the image of Faarl to remove that box on the right?
  • "The Tulvarees also learned to understand the strangers' language and to follow his commands." This sentence switches between plural and singular in an awkward way. --Eyrezer 00:23, June 4, 2010 (UTC)
    • Good points. Both should be addressed! ~ SavageBob 01:26, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 02:47, June 9, 2010 (UTC)


  • Perhaps add an image of Faarl to the history section? -- 1358 (Talk) 16:30, May 30, 2010 (UTC)