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Trot

  • Nominated by: Wok142 (talk) 06:50, 27 May 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Love this guy
  • Date Archived: 06:22, 14 June 2024 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 784 words (67 introduction, 664 body, 53 behind the scenes)
  • Word count at nomination time: 844 words (67 introduction, 720 body, 57 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:Comics

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Support

  1. ACvote Trot can have a little dismemberment, as a treat Zed42 Wolfpack emblem (talk) 23:16, 4 June 2024 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Lewisr (talk) 23:58, 5 June 2024 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Was pleasantly suprised to see Kei Zama artwork in, had had fun with that GA.—spookywillowwtalk 05:04, 9 June 2024 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Master FredceriqueCommerce Guild(talk) (he/him) 06:21, 14 June 2024 (UTC)

Object

Zed
  • The Biography can be subsectioned.
  • Jega's Music Hall and Petting Zoo could probably be mentioned earlier, since Trot and the squad are seen operating out of the establishment.
  • Similarly, I think the other members of the team can be introduced when the squad is initially mentioned.
  • As far as I can tell, the comic doesn't identify Nar Shaddaa as a moon, so that'll need another reference.
  • Some of the dialogue can be summarized a little to focus more on actions and intent rather than exact words.
  • Trot's clothing should go under Equipment rather than P&T. Zed42 Wolfpack emblem (talk) 23:52, 28 May 2024 (UTC)
    • I've cleaned it up some. Wok142 (talk) 00:26, 29 May 2024 (UTC)
      • Regarding sectioning, it's preferable to avoid single-paragraph sections if possible. However, I think the first section can probably be merged with the second, while the "Encountering 4-LOM" section can be split into two paragraphs. Zed42 Wolfpack emblem (talk) 21:40, 31 May 2024 (UTC)
        • Understood, reformatted. Wok142 (talk) 22:41, 31 May 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 06:21, 14 June 2024 (UTC)