- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Trition Trade Route
- Nominated by: Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 12:00, 29 September 2008 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Okay - another test. No trade routes have been FA/GAed as far as I know. All criticism and suggestions welcomed.
(3 AC/4 user/7 total)
Support
- Nice job NaruHina Talk
03:25, 30 September 2008 (UTC) - Good work. --Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 09:56, 30 September 2008 (UTC)
- It took me a while to find time to read it; that's why I couldn't vote earlier. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 10:01, 30 September 2008 (UTC)
Fantastic. DC 15:41, 1 October 2008 (UTC)- Converted the text on the second image to past tense, and gave it a full stop. SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is a lie) 22:17, 3 October 2008 (UTC)
Greyman(Talk) 16:20, 4 October 2008 (UTC)
Graestan(Talk) 12:10, 12 October 2008 (UTC)
Oppose
- Written in NaruHina's Death Note:
The Bts needs to be sourced.- The BTS is self-sourcing as it refers to the individual book releases in the text.
You may want to have a list of systems breaking up the list of plantets.- Not sure what you mean by this. All the known planets on the route are included in the list. If you mean the name of the system for each planet, then it gets tricky. Karideph and Pergitor are known by the planet name only, all the others are referenced to be in "systems with the same name as the primary planet" apart from Gandle Ott, which is in the Ott system. - Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 12:53, 29 September 2008 (UTC)
- I ment if one planet was in a system list the system and put that as the category on the page and include another paragraph about the system. There are more planets along a hyperspace route than the main export ones. If no system is listed then just list the planet.
- Here's my reasoning for why that can't be done—all of the planets listed are the only known planets on the Trade Route. There is no information given if said planet is the only habitable planet in its system. There are no systems on the Trade Route where the planet is unknown. Linking to the system gives less information - compare Kolatill to Kolatill system. - Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 14:10, 29 September 2008 (UTC)
- I ment if one planet was in a system list the system and put that as the category on the page and include another paragraph about the system. There are more planets along a hyperspace route than the main export ones. If no system is listed then just list the planet.
- Not sure what you mean by this. All the known planets on the route are included in the list. If you mean the name of the system for each planet, then it gets tricky. Karideph and Pergitor are known by the planet name only, all the others are referenced to be in "systems with the same name as the primary planet" apart from Gandle Ott, which is in the Ott system. - Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 12:53, 29 September 2008 (UTC)
- Cavalier One will get this FA'd NaruHina Talk
12:45, 29 September 2008 (UTC)
Does the source really speculate like that about the foundation of the Route? Graestan(Talk) 21:17, 30 September 2008 (UTC)- Admittedly, no. All the facts are correct, but it is extrapolation based on known facts. I did debate whether or not to add it, but it felt important enough to include. However, if it is a serious problem, I could reword it and shift it into the BTS section. - Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 09:12, 1 October 2008 (UTC)
- Toprawa:
No era tags? I think they should also appear in the infobox, which I think is a field that was not added upon its creation. Please consider adding it to the infobox template.Toprawa and Ralltiir 03:48, 4 October 2008 (UTC)- While I have no problem with adding era tags/ fields, I thought that an article about a trade route would probably fall under the "timeless" category of using era fields, much like planets and species? - Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 14:46, 5 October 2008 (UTC)
- I wouldn't think so, since I'm assuming that hyperlanes could only have been created following the advent of hyperdrive technology. That is, someone did theoretically forge the lane at one time. In more rudimentary terms, this is like a road. Someone must have created and paved this road, which can (with source material) be definitely pinpointed to X time. Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:23, 7 October 2008 (UTC)
- To add on to this, we know of at least one hyperlane that became defunct with the advent of a larger hyperlane running through the same area. See: Anoat trade corridor. Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:27, 7 October 2008 (UTC)
- Fair point. Added. - Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 15:05, 8 October 2008 (UTC)
- While I have no problem with adding era tags/ fields, I thought that an article about a trade route would probably fall under the "timeless" category of using era fields, much like planets and species? - Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 14:46, 5 October 2008 (UTC)
Comments
- Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 12:10, 12 October 2008 (UTC)