- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Treasure Trove
- Nominated by: Toprawa and Ralltiir 07:38, 6 November 2008 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Empire Strikes Back goodness!
(3 AC/2 users/5 total)
Support
- IFYLOFD (And now, young Skywalker, you will die.) 03:26, 7 November 2008 (UTC)
- You actually made me go and read through the adventure because I became intrigued. - Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 09:02, 7 November 2008 (UTC)- Chack Jadson (Talk) 22:32, 7 November 2008 (UTC)
- SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is a lie) 09:44, 10 November 2008 (UTC)
- Graestan(Talk) 01:59, 14 November 2008 (UTC)
Oppose
- SoresuMakashi
Can we at least get a stub on Natejeka. The red disrupts the flow of the article.- Yeah, I was going to get that since she's my next GAN. You should understand, though, that the GAN red link rule is less stringent than FAN and allows an acceptable number of red links in the article. This sort of objection technically shouldn't be imposed for a single red link. Instead, the objector could simply kill the red link if it seems bothersome.
dying from grievous injuries and exposure and holding a datapad. Exposure to what? Also get rid of the two ands if possible.- Exposure to the vacuum leak, as previously established. "Exposure" is generally applied to mean "to a certain physical condition," such as vacuum. I could restate what is already established by writing, "from exposure to vacuum," but I think that's just reiterating the obvious. If you feel this is necessary, let me know.
unsuccessfully chased the Rebel agents away from the crash site. It sounds as if Chreeto tried to chase them away from the site, but failed and the Rebels managed to stay in the system. In reality, he simply failed to destroy/capture the Trove.- Well, I think you're misreading the information. Chreeto never failed to destroy/capture the Treasure Trove. In fact, he had no involvement in its fate whatsoever. He merely staked out the crash site to wait for other Rebels to hunt. So, I'm not sure what your objection is here. I could add "away from the crash site and out of the Hoth system," if that makes it clearer for you.
- Sorry, I mistyped. The last bit should have been In reality, he simply failed to destroy/capture the agents. What I was trying to ask was whether Chreeto failed in chasing them out of the system, or whether he did chase them out but just wasn't able to destroy the ship. SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is a lie) 08:38, 9 November 2008 (UTC)
- Gotcha. Fixed. Toprawa and Ralltiir 05:42, 10 November 2008 (UTC)
- Sorry, I mistyped. The last bit should have been In reality, he simply failed to destroy/capture the agents. What I was trying to ask was whether Chreeto failed in chasing them out of the system, or whether he did chase them out but just wasn't able to destroy the ship. SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is a lie) 08:38, 9 November 2008 (UTC)
- Well, I think you're misreading the information. Chreeto never failed to destroy/capture the Treasure Trove. In fact, he had no involvement in its fate whatsoever. He merely staked out the crash site to wait for other Rebels to hunt. So, I'm not sure what your objection is here. I could add "away from the crash site and out of the Hoth system," if that makes it clearer for you.
the Rebel agents successfully completed the transport's mission by delivering the blaster gas shipment to the Alliance Fleet. I thought earlier it said that the cargo pods were blown out. How could the gas have survived? Mention something about the discovery of intact gas earlier. And elaborate on where it was found, if that info exists.SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is a lie) 08:19, 6 November 2008 (UTC)- Once more, I think you're misreading the information. The article clearly establishes that the Treasure Trove needed to pick up its shipment from Cloud City and never escaped the Hoth system, so therefore it never completed its mission and never did acquire the blaster gas. No blaster gas was involved in the transport's wreck. I've added a little bit to explain that the agents completed the mission by "acquiring and delivering" the shipment. Toprawa and Ralltiir 16:46, 6 November 2008 (UTC)
- Alright, thanks for your explanations. Now that I read through it again, I don't know what I was thinking. Just the one objection remaining. SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is a lie) 08:38, 9 November 2008 (UTC)
- Once more, I think you're misreading the information. The article clearly establishes that the Treasure Trove needed to pick up its shipment from Cloud City and never escaped the Hoth system, so therefore it never completed its mission and never did acquire the blaster gas. No blaster gas was involved in the transport's wreck. I've added a little bit to explain that the agents completed the mission by "acquiring and delivering" the shipment. Toprawa and Ralltiir 16:46, 6 November 2008 (UTC)
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