- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Tosinqas
- Nominated by: Clone Commander Lee Talk 11:38, December 25, 2011 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: HoloNet News is a gold mine.
(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
Seems solid. IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 23:51, December 25, 2011 (UTC)- --Cal Jedi
(Personal Comm Channel) 04:35, December 29, 2011 (UTC) - Toprawa and Ralltiir 03:49, December 30, 2011 (UTC)
Menkooroo 19:48, December 30, 2011 (UTC)- Note that I reworded the personality and traits slightly. Hanzo Hasashi 15:30, January 5, 2012 (UTC)
- All clear, thanks. Clone Commander Lee Talk 17:57, January 5, 2012 (UTC)
Object
Tosinqas!
Just one --- the body never actually states that he's part of the Bounty Hunters' Guild. Can you stick in an explicit mention of this somewhere near the beginning?Menkooroo 04:12, December 30, 2011 (UTC)- Added. Thanks for the review. Clone Commander Lee Talk 14:00, December 30, 2011 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 05:41, January 6, 2012 (UTC)
- Behind the story - Niai Fieso on The chronicles of a writer — Sander de Lange's StarWars.com Blog (original site is defunct) reveals that Sander de Lange originally considered using Tosinqas in his "What's the Story?" databank entry for Niai Fieso. Do you think that's worth a mention in "Behind the scenes"? Menkooroo 02:17, December 26, 2011 (UTC)
- Indeed. Added something about this to the BtS. And thanks for the good catch! Clone Commander Lee Talk 09:10, December 26, 2011 (UTC)
- What you've added isn't quite accurate --- the author didn't actually use Tosinqas; he considered using him, but he ultimately used Freon Drevan instead. Menkooroo 20:59, December 27, 2011 (UTC)
- For this Xexto I found 2: A Xexto bounty hunter named Tosinqas without a face and just a death scene (wich envolved into a second entry I had send in): Isn't that what currently stands in the article. Also, that's the way it is presented in the Niai Fieso article. Clone Commander Lee Talk 09:55, December 28, 2011 (UTC)
- Yup, he used Tosinqas in a different entry that he wrote and submitted (not for Fieso), but that entry was never published. The current wording of the BTS is a little confusing and doesn't really get the proper info across. Menkooroo 20:46, December 28, 2011 (UTC)
- Better? Clone Commander Lee Talk 20:52, December 28, 2011 (UTC)
- I did a bit more tweaking. I hope you don't mind. Menkooroo 21:01, December 28, 2011 (UTC)
- No prob, thanks. Clone Commander Lee Talk 21:12, December 28, 2011 (UTC)
- I did a bit more tweaking. I hope you don't mind. Menkooroo 21:01, December 28, 2011 (UTC)
- Better? Clone Commander Lee Talk 20:52, December 28, 2011 (UTC)
- Yup, he used Tosinqas in a different entry that he wrote and submitted (not for Fieso), but that entry was never published. The current wording of the BTS is a little confusing and doesn't really get the proper info across. Menkooroo 20:46, December 28, 2011 (UTC)
- For this Xexto I found 2: A Xexto bounty hunter named Tosinqas without a face and just a death scene (wich envolved into a second entry I had send in): Isn't that what currently stands in the article. Also, that's the way it is presented in the Niai Fieso article. Clone Commander Lee Talk 09:55, December 28, 2011 (UTC)
- What you've added isn't quite accurate --- the author didn't actually use Tosinqas; he considered using him, but he ultimately used Freon Drevan instead. Menkooroo 20:59, December 27, 2011 (UTC)
- Indeed. Added something about this to the BtS. And thanks for the good catch! Clone Commander Lee Talk 09:10, December 26, 2011 (UTC)
