Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Toniray White

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Toniray White

• Nominated by: —spookywilloww^talk 20:48, 25 July 2023 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Got shoved over due to Inquisitor: Rise of the Red Blade update.
• Date Archived: 17:10, 1 August 2023 (UTC)
• Final word count: 278 words (70 introduction, 179 body, 29 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:ENTWP:CHISSWP:NOVELSWP:GE

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 23:59, 25 July 2023 (UTC)
2. MORE GANs Lewisr (talk) 00:01, 26 July 2023 (UTC)
3. Fan26 (Talk) 13:47, 1 August 2023 (UTC)
4. Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:36, 1 August 2023 (UTC)
5. Booply (talk) 17:07, 1 August 2023 (UTC)

Object

Ayrehead

• The "at some point by 14 BBY" stuff reads a little weird. I'd recommend rewording it so that you just say it was during the Imperial Era and then say "sometime later in 14 BBY she remembered etc..." since that'll still show that the night occurred prior to 14 BBY without needing to say it up front. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:36, 1 August 2023 (UTC)
  • Tweaked.—spookywilloww^talk 15:20, 1 August 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 17:09, 1 August 2023 (UTC)