Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Tomb of Miktrull

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Tomb of Miktrull

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Can you check Scarif and Other Outer Rim Planets for a potential mention.
- I just checked the book and the temple isn't mentioned outright. It does state that the planet contained "the ruins and the temples of the Zeffo," so I would say that you could add it to the source list as an indirect mention. AmazinglyCool (talk) 13:53, 29 December 2022 (UTC)
~~Are there any quotes for the description.~~ AmazinglyCool (talk) 04:14, 29 December 2022 (UTC)
- All Done :) Marvacian Archivist (talk) 14:36, 3 January 2023 (UTC)

What does this mention in the Encyclopedia issue consist of?
~~You should use {{EncyclopediaCite}} when linking/referencing Encyclopedia issues.~~ Samonic ^(Talk) 10:24, 29 December 2022 (UTC)
- Added the template now and all done. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 14:36, 3 January 2023 (UTC)

Quotes cannot go between section titles. You'd need to move that under the location bit. However, I'd like to build further than that and suggest removing the subsections of descriptions and merging all of that as one as I think the subsections are too small individually to be separate. The location and exterior paragraphs are the right sizes to be merged into one paragraph as well.
On the topic of description. The fact it's dedicated to Miktrull should be moved to the start of the description.
- I meant this for the article body, rather than the intro. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 18:27, 5 January 2023 (UTC)
~~I'd recommend adding that the Venator was Galactic Republic.~~ Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 21:27, 2 January 2023 (UTC)
- All suggestions completed apart from the first suggestion. Not sure what you mean when you say that quotes cannot go between section titles. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 14:43, 3 January 2023 (UTC)
  - This is what I meant for the quote part. I also forgot to put the interior as part of that merge suggestion as well. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 18:27, 5 January 2023 (UTC)
    - Ah, I see what you mean. Confused about the interior subsection though, should I merge that with the rest of the description? Thought it would be best to keep it separate so that readers can understand the article much better.Marvacian Archivist (talk) 18:30, 5 January 2023 (UTC)