Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Togruta

The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.

Togruta

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Support

1. Xzylongann 18:47, 21 July 2008 (UTC)
2. JustinGann 00:23, 22 July 2008 (UTC)

Object

1. Toprawa
   • This one has a long way to go
   • No sourcing, whatsoever
   • You have fact tags
   • Article doesn't match the MOS or LG.
   • Bulleted prose
   • Images are horribly placed. Toprawa and Ralltiir 01:21, 22 July 2008 (UTC)
     • Please read the rules at the top of this page before submitting an article for GA. Toprawa and Ralltiir 01:23, 22 July 2008 (UTC)
2. Per Toprawa, it needs more work. Although some parts are sources, it needs more sourcing:
   • It has several {{Fact}} tags and a {{Citation}} tag;
   • Some parts of the "Togruta in the Galaxy" section need to be sourced and rewritten;
   • The "Behind the scenes" sections needs to be sourced;
   • The "Names" section looks like it needs an expansion;
     • I could be wrong, but I'm getting the feeling some other parts of the article need an expansion. --Jedimca0^{(Do or Do Not, There is No Try)} 20:32, 28 July 2008 (UTC)

Comments

• Sharp fangs, natural camouflage, and members of the Jedi Order, what more could you want? Xzylongann 18:47, 21 July 2008 (UTC)