Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Tivvy

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Tivvy

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:03, July 31, 2015 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Another nom from Leia

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. 501st dogma(talk) 01:04, August 18, 2015 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 15:03, September 7, 2015 (UTC)
  3. Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 19:02, November 6, 2015 (UTC)
  4. ACvote IFYLOFD (Talk) 03:20, November 11, 2015 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 22:40, December 15, 2015 (UTC)

Object

501st
  • It might be good to state in the BtS that the comic is canon. Also, I'm assuming the ambush doesn't warrant an article. 501st dogma(talk) 17:26, August 17, 2015 (UTC)
    • Added and nope it's over in a few panels and can just be covered in the mission article. Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:54, August 17, 2015 (UTC)
Cav
  • Names of Leia's companions in the intro would be appreciated. - Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 21:46, August 19, 2015 (UTC)
  • One thing - Leia infers that Tivvy is a Smuggler because he is Sullustan. Does the source actually state he is a smuggler, or is this supposition from Leia's remarks? - Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 00:51, August 28, 2015 (UTC)
    • Leia suggests it but then Tula directly states that he's one elsewhere in the comic. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:41, August 28, 2015 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • As a reviewing note, your quote formatting in this article is nothing short of terrible. As you will see from my review, in the Bio quote you missed a comma, had a misplaced space, and had a double "the," while in the P/T quote you missed italicization and used an ellipsis when the source uses a dash. Your responsibility as an article writer is to transcribe quotes from sources accurately, since reviewers typically don't take the time to look at a source to see whether you got it right. I was just fortunate enough to be able to check the SW.com preview for this comic issue to double check your work, and I'm glad I did.
    • I'll take more care with quotes in future. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:53, November 19, 2015 (UTC)
  • Not an objection, since I'm asking Culator to fix it, but your image crop is rather poor. If your crop cuts a speech bubble down the middle, you should always take the time to white out any stray text, since it looks bad. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 03:53, November 19, 2015 (UTC)
  • See what you can do about maybe putting an image in the Bio. With the paragraph break, I think you have just enough room for one. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 03:56, November 19, 2015 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 22:40, December 15, 2015 (UTC)