Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Tirs Maladane

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Tirs Maladane

• Nominated by: 501st dogma^(talk) 00:15, June 5, 2012 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Since I only have three GANs on the go, decided to add another for Warfare.

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. Cumulonimbus Cloud ^{(Meeting Room)} 02:31, June 11, 2012 (UTC)
2. Good work.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 01:41, June 18, 2012 (UTC)
3. Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 22:02, July 2, 2012 (UTC)
4. —Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 18:42, July 3, 2012 (UTC)
5. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 01:37, July 7, 2012 (UTC)
6. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 00:50, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Objections, objections…

• Could you mention the fact that Caedus was the GA Chief of State in the intro and bio?
  • Better?
• Not sure if his hometown is relevant to the infobox, unless you wanna compose it like… *[[Little Mochot]], [[Tatooine/Legends|Tatooine]]? I don't know.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 00:21, June 17, 2012 (UTC)
  • Thanks for the review. I removed Little Mochot, it does'nt seem right in the infobox. Thanks for pointing that out. 501st dogma^(talk) 12:01, June 17, 2012 (UTC)
    • No problem.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 01:41, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Cav

• Tirs Maladane was a lieutenant gunner - what is a lieutenant gunner? Doe you mean a gunnery lieutenant? Same for any subsequent mentions in intro and bio.
  • It states it as a lieutenant gunner in the book, so I copyed that. I can change that if you want.
    • It states he is a gunner, and a lieutenant. Never a "lieutenant gunner".
      • Remedied in the article. 501st dogma^(talk) 18:50, June 18, 2012 (UTC)
• Why did the Jedi Order abandon the GA at Kuat?
  • Done.
• Mention the alliance between the Jedi and Wookiees that led to the Battle of Kashyyyk. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 11:30, June 18, 2012 (UTC)
  • Thanks for the review. I added somethin about the Wookiees harbouring the Jedi, that should make the alliance clear. 501st dogma^(talk) 11:46, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Exiled Jedi

• Context on Pii III.
• "Maladane and some of the crew called her the "Black Annie."" Please make it clearer that your talking about the ship, not Jacen Solo.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 14:19, July 5, 2012 (UTC)
  • Both done. Thanks for the review. 501st dogma^(talk) 14:22, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

• Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 00:50, July 11, 2012 (UTC)