Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Timar Daragon

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Timar Daragon

• Nominated by: IFYLOFD ^{(You will pay the price for your lack of vision!)} 02:48, 25 August 2009 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: WP:TOTJ.

(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. This really has been on the page unfairly for far too long. Grae's objection seems to be fixed. There is still alot of resemblance, but there is no longer a cut-and-paste feel to the article. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is the truth)} 06:54, October 27, 2009 (UTC)
2. --Eyrezer 09:28, October 27, 2009 (UTC)
3. Jonjedigrandmaster ^{(Jedi Beacon)} 03:19, November 20, 2009 (UTC)
4. CC7567 ^(talk) 04:45, November 22, 2009 (UTC)
5. Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 13:42, November 23, 2009 (UTC)

Object

1. Paraphrase more. This cannot read exactly like Hok Daragon. Graestan^(Talk) 16:20, 26 August 2009 (UTC)
   • I don't exactly see how this is a problem; all the info on her is included, and the only thing that really distinguishes them is that one is male and one is female. They're together for the entirety of the comic. IFYLOFD ^{(You will pay the price for your lack of vision!)} 15:17, September 7, 2009 (UTC)
     • Fine, fine, I'll paraphrase. IFYLOFD ^{(You will pay the price for your lack of vision!)} 22:57, September 9, 2009 (UTC)
       • Wording has been varied. I hope this will satisfy your objection. IFYLOFD ^{(You will pay the price for your lack of vision!)} 21:13, September 19, 2009 (UTC)
   • Objection(s) overridden by AgriCorps 04:08, November 23, 2009 (UTC)
2. This is still too similar to Hok. Yes, a few things here and there have been changed, but there are still several places that could easily be paraphrased, where you could easily substitute a few synonyms to make it so that there aren't so many sentences that read exactly or almost exactly the same. Jonjedigrandmaster ^{(Jedi Beacon)} 17:51, November 5, 2009 (UTC)
   • Addressed. IFYLOFD ^{(You will pay the price for your lack of vision!)} 03:05, November 20, 2009 (UTC)
3. Attack of the Clone
   • Please vary your word choice. This might be picky, but two sentences starting off with "during" doesn't always promote good writing. And please continue to watch your linking. CC7567 ^(talk) 20:38, November 21, 2009 (UTC)
     • Addressed. IFYLOFD ^{(You will pay the price for your lack of vision!)} 04:11, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

Comments

Remove nomination (AgriCorps vote only)

1. Cut-and-paste of Hok Daragon. Nominator expresses no desire to paraphrase. Graestan^(Talk) 18:47, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 13:42, November 23, 2009 (UTC)