Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/The Rakata and the Unknown World

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The Rakata and the Unknown World

  • Nominated by: Jedi Kasra (comlink) 14:52, July 19, 2010 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Awesome stuff.

(3 ACs/4 Users/7 Total)

Support

  1. Pre-nom reviewed. —Master Jonathan New Jedi Order (Jedi Council Chambers) 17:49, July 19, 2010 (UTC)
  2. Menkooroo 01:41, July 20, 2010 (UTC)
  3. SWJedi1998 23:02, July 19, (UTC)
  4. ACvote Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 04:59, July 24, 2010 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Barrrrrrk. Chack Jadson (Talk) 14:25, July 24, 2010 (UTC)
  6. ACvote Grunny (talk) 08:59, July 25, 2010 (UTC)
  7. Wonderful. Darth Trayus(Trayus Academy) 00:34, July 26, 2010 (UTC)

Object

Bcoz Bane
  • "Having been retrained in the Jedi ways, Revan redeemed himself by routing the Sith Empire and defeating his former apprentice, the ruling Dark Lord Darth Malak." I think this can be condensed into something like "Revan was later redeemed and retrained as a Jedi." The stuff about him defeating Malak seems unnecessary to me. Your thoughts? Chack Jadson (Talk) 16:41, July 19, 2010 (UTC)
    • I don't know, I believe it's relevant, since in the next paragraph it says something about the Jedi Civil War's end. Readers not familiar with the subject material might want a brief rundown on how Revan redeemed himself. If you want, I can remove it, but cut some of it down already. Please let me know what you think.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 19:33, July 19, 2010 (UTC)
      • I'm afraid I just don't see the need for the stuff about Malak. It just strikes me as unnecessary. Chack Jadson (Talk) 23:30, July 21, 2010 (UTC)
        • I disagree, since it's mentioned in the book and all, but I removed this nonetheless.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 23:35, July 21, 2010 (UTC)
안녕하세요 가스라
  • Well-done! I was going to remove the word "necropolis", as it linked to a specific planet with that name, but I figured you'd know whether or not it was the appropriate word to use. If not, jettison that puppy, and if so, de-link it and we'll call it a deal. Menkooroo 00:29, July 20, 2010 (UTC)
    • It is the right usage, but I completely forgot about the separate planet. Removed, and thanks for the review!--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 01:35, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 18:13, July 28, 2010 (UTC)