Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/The Clone Wars: Mouse Hunt

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The Clone Wars: Mouse Hunt

• Nominated by: Mauser^Comlink 00:05, 5 August 2009 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: It's not my fault, Kilson asked me to do this!

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. Well, nonetheless, Nicely done :) JangFett ^Talk 00:50, 5 August 2009 (UTC)
2. Nicely done Mauser, thanks for doing this. :) Kilson Likes PIE 18:59, 05 August 09 (UTC)
3. —Master Jonathan^{(Jedi Council Chambers)} 01:26, 12 August 2009 (UTC)
4. Sorry I took so long to reply. Jonjedigrandmaster ^{(Jedi Beacon)} 23:56, 21 August 2009 (UTC)
5. Toprawa and Ralltiir 04:04, 31 August 2009 (UTC)
6. Graestan^(Talk) 14:18, September 1, 2009 (UTC)

Object

1. From the Council Chambers:
   • We can now link to individual pages of the webcomic, so please reference accordingly.
   • Context on "Shinies".
   • Otherwise, good job. —Master Jonathan^{(Jedi Council Chambers)} 03:08, 5 August 2009 (UTC)
     • All done. Thanks for the review. Mauser^Comlink 12:04, 5 August 2009 (UTC)
       • As I explained to Kilson and JangFett, not everything can be sourced to one page. The writer, penciller, etc. need to be sourced to the "inside cover" of the issue, while the issue number, "preceded by", and "followed by" fields in the infobox need to be sourced to the table of contents. Also check the BTS to make sure statements there are sourced to the correct page. —Master Jonathan^{(Jedi Council Chambers)} 04:40, 6 August 2009 (UTC)
         • Adressed. Mauser^Comlink 22:51, 11 August 2009 (UTC)
2. The Grand Master
   • Actually, you do need to use the clones' numbers instead of names per this CT.
     • Adressed.
   • "asks Stripe for his opinion about the alert and wonders whether the officers do the same at every inspection just to drill the rookies." Do the same what? Please check grammar. Jonjedigrandmaster ^{(Jedi Beacon)} 17:14, 5 August 2009 (UTC)
     • Adressed. Thanks for the review. Mauser^Comlink 17:21, 5 August 2009 (UTC)
       • Please check again. You say he is wondering whether they "do the same" at every inspection, but you don't specify what it is he thinks they are doing. (i.e. what does he think they might be doing the same at each inspection?)
         • Changed wording. Mauser^Comlink 03:08, 15 August 2009 (UTC)
3. After a second look, you're missing a quote for the plot. JangFett ^Talk 17:37, 5 August 2009 (UTC)
   • Do we need one? Mauser^Comlink 17:46, 5 August 2009 (UTC)
     • After Kilson's Procedure had been approved, someone gave me the suggestion of adding the tagline of the comic as the head quote and then a quote from inside the comic in the plot for Transfer, and since then I've been doing the same for other OOU TCW comics.
       • Okay. Done. Mauser^Comlink 17:58, 5 August 2009 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 14:18, September 1, 2009 (UTC)

1. This isn't an objection but, I see you use "Cody" and "Rex" instead of their designated Clone trooper serial numbers. i.e, CC-2224. Possibly you can use their numbers instead of their nicknames? JangFett ^Talk 00:53, 5 August 2009 (UTC)