Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Tey How

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Tey How

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:19, September 20, 2019 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: After two Republic casualties, now a Federation one

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote Objections handled via IRC. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 22:54, September 20, 2019 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 01:51, September 27, 2019 (UTC)
  3. ACvote 1358 (Talk) 18:39, October 1, 2019 (UTC)
  4. —spookywillowwtalk 18:51, October 1, 2019 (UTC)
  5. Lewisr (talk) 19:54, October 1, 2019 (UTC)

Object

Tommy
  • I think those 4 images make it look a bit cluttered. I think you should just keep a couple of them and enlarge them. Tommy Imperial Emblem Macaroni 13:54, September 20, 2019 (UTC)
    • I've removed two images, do you really think they should be larger than 250px though? Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:27, September 20, 2019 (UTC)
      • Hmm, I still think they could be a little larger but I'm satisfied if you are. Tommy Imperial Emblem Macaroni 21:17, September 22, 2019 (UTC)
Editor
  • The Federation deployed a group of OOM-series battle droids, not B1s, to verify the gas killed Jinn and Kenobi. So just switch that to say it was an OOM command unit and security battle droids. There appear to be 8 or 9 security droids, although the number seems to change between shots.--Editoronthewiki (talk) 22:07, September 22, 2019 (UTC)
    • Ah good point, I'd forgotten they're a separate model. Changed to be accurate now. Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:33, September 22, 2019 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • For the infobox, do none of the sources say that Tey How was killed aboard the Vuutun Palaa? I think it would be best if we used a source that actually identifies that ship by name, which the film of course does not. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 17:35, September 26, 2019 (UTC)
  • I'd prefer to see the Biography avoid beginning verbatim with the intro. "Tey How was a Neimoidian female who served..." Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:40, September 26, 2019 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 19:55, October 1, 2019 (UTC)