- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
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Tector-class Star Destroyer
- Nominated by: —Tommy-Macaroni
(TAKE A SEAT) 21:57, February 22, 2018 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Original.
(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
- --Vitus InfinitusTalk 15:27, February 23, 2018 (UTC)
- Thanks for your review Vitus!—Tommy-Macaroni
(TAKE A SEAT) 17:27, February 23, 2018 (UTC)
- Thanks for your review Vitus!—Tommy-Macaroni
MasterFred(Whatever) 21:33, March 30, 2018 (UTC)
Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:44, April 10, 2018 (UTC)
1358 (Talk) 16:21, April 11, 2018 (UTC)- --Lewisr (talk) 16:27, April 11, 2018 (UTC)
Object
Fred strikes back
It should be mentioned in the "Characteristics" section that the ship is hangarless.MasterFred(Whatever) 20:42, March 29, 2018 (UTC)
Toprawa
A few preliminaries. Firstly, "hangarless" isn't a word. You will need to revise this in all instances, unless it's part of a direct quote.- Done.
As with my objection on Victory-class, the fact that this ship served with the Imperial Navy isn't really relevant to its Characteristics section. You should work that term into the History if you want to keep it in the article.- Done.
I don't know what ref 6 is doing, but that should be using the old SW.com template to cite message board posts, including the original link to that post.Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:11, April 1, 2018 (UTC)Going along with my objections on Victory-class, the Characteristics section here doesn't really need to mention that this Star Destroyer has a long, angled, gray hull. All Star Destroyers by definition have long, angled, gray hulls. By virtue of calling it a Star Destroyer, you're already effectively achieving that detail.- Done.
Galactic Atlas alone cannot be used to date-reference the events of "Levers of Power." You will need to use a manual reference note. Something like "Star Wars: Galactic Atlas dates the Battle of Endor, the events of which appear in the short story "The Levers of Power," to 4 ABY."- Done.
You need to fully reference the first BTS paragraph. Don't rely on the tweet for that whole paragraph.Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:11, April 10, 2018 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 16:30, April 11, 2018 (UTC)
- Nominated here [1].—Tommy-Macaroni
(TAKE A SEAT) 07:25, February 23, 2018 (UTC)