Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Tarrin Datch/Legends

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Tarrin Datch

(+6)

Support

1. As nominator.Toprawa and Ralltiir 05:49, 29 December 2007 (UTC)
2. Greyman^(Paratus) 03:29, 30 December 2007 (UTC)
3. Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 22:55, 8 January 2008 (UTC)
4. Goodwood ^{(Alliance Intelligence)} 01:24, 15 January 2008 (UTC)
5. Atarumaster88 ^{(Talk page)} 02:43, 21 January 2008 (UTC)
6. Wow. Stake black ^msg 13:22, 22 January 2008 (UTC)

Oppose

1. From the Slightly Mysterious Desk of Chack Jadson
   • These two sentences in the intro do not really flow: " His value to the Rebellion's cause came in the dual ability to pilot both starfighters and the Alliance's dilapidated cargo transports. He served with the elite Rogue Squadron under the command of Luke Skywalker as Rogue Ten during the Galactic Civil War." It could be simply fixed by adding just a few words though.
   • "Datch's career saw him fight most notably during the Battle of Hoth with Rogue Group," (still in the intro) seems to be phrased awkwardly.
   • First paragraph in Bio: "He grew up on Pellezara station, a floating space city in the Duro system owned by his parents. The space station serviced large freighters delivering supplies to the planet Duro." Perhaps merge these two sentences or something, so the next one flows better.
   • Remove "not a transport" from the following sentence: "Datch steered the Rebel ship towards the heart of heavy traffic, weaving as though he was piloting a starfighter, not a transport." Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 21:50, 2 January 2008 (UTC)
     • There, that should just about do it. Thanks. Toprawa and Ralltiir 03:59, 3 January 2008 (UTC)

From the trimmed-down desk of Atarumaster88

• Some short paragraphs and sentences in "Fighting the Empire" could be beefed up.
  • Made some minor additions, got rid of some unnecessary simple sentences.
• Source the succession box.
  • Done. Toprawa and Ralltiir 23:08, 17 January 2008 (UTC)
• Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88 ^{(Talk page)} 21:07, 17 January 2008 (UTC)

Comments

• A minor side project until I can put the final touches on the wampa article. Toprawa and Ralltiir 05:49, 29 December 2007 (UTC)
  • Sorry Ataru. Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 21:50, 2 January 2008 (UTC)
    • Hmm? For what? I've never even read this article. Atarumaster88 ^{(Talk page)} 04:02, 15 January 2008 (UTC)
      • Taking your "from the desk of" thing. :P Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 00:15, 23 January 2008 (UTC)