Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Talisman of the Raven

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Talisman of the Raven

• Nominated by: LelalMekha 17:55, June 24, 2012 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Mamma mia, let's-a go! (said the ol' plumber from Brooklyn)

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. Good work on all this Charal related stuff. 501st dogma^(talk) 13:48, June 30, 2012 (UTC)
2. C'est fantastique! Menkooroo (talk) 19:41, July 8, 2012 (UTC)
3. Plagueis327 (talk) 02:05, July 13, 2012 (UTC)
4. Nice work.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 13:23, July 15, 2012 (UTC)
5. Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 19:09, July 22, 2012 (UTC)
6. CC7567 ^(talk) 21:28, July 29, 2012 (UTC)

Object

501st

• In the intro, you say Charal was trapped in the raven form after its destruction. Could you say before that somewhere that Charal was in raven form during the fight with the Ewoks, just to give a bit of context?
  • Done. --LelalMekha (talk) 13:34, June 30, 2012 (UTC)
• "Together, they were eventually stranded on Endor, a distant moon untouched by galactic civilization, where many intergalactic travelers had found themselves stranded due to the stellar anomalies surrounding it, such as the Endor Gate black hole." Could you find a synonym for stranded so you don't have two in the same sentence.
  • There you are. --LelalMekha (talk) 13:34, June 30, 2012 (UTC)
• "Charal was trapped in raven form." Could you add to this sentence a bit? For example, say something like; 'Because she was in raven from when the ring was destroyed, Charal was doomed to remain a raven forever."
  • Is this okay now? --LelalMekha (talk) 13:34, June 30, 2012 (UTC)
• Databank enteries for Terak and Charal should be added to Sources. Also, if there are any other sources that mention the ring, they should be added to Sources as well.
  • Fixed. --LelalMekha (talk) 13:34, June 30, 2012 (UTC)
• Looks good. 501st dogma^(talk) 13:15, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Nevermore

• Just a couple of post-prenom ones: Witches of Dathomir is linked to in the infobox under "Culture" but isn't mentioned anywhere else in the article. Only the Nightsisters are mentioned in the intro and body. Could you mention the Witches of Dathomir somewhere in the body so that the info isn't exclusive to the infobox?
  • Fixed. --LelalMekha (talk) 19:32, July 8, 2012 (UTC)
• Could ref [2] use {{CSWECite}} and source the specific CSWE entry? Menkooroo (talk) 19:07, July 8, 2012 (UTC)
  • Done. --LelalMekha (talk) 19:32, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 21:28, July 29, 2012 (UTC)