Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Taggor Bren

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Taggor Bren

• Nominated by: AmazinglyCool (talk) 22:02, 9 July 2024 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• Date Archived: 21:21, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
• Final word count: 815 words (84 introduction, 536 body, 195 behind the scenes)
• Word count at nomination time: 749 words (89 introduction, 467 body, 193 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:SWCT

(4 ACs/0 Users/4 Total)

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Support

1. Lewisr (talk) 01:17, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
2. —spookywilloww^talk 03:41, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
3. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:18, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
4. Master Fredcerique(talk) (he/him) 21:19, 30 September 2024 (UTC)

Object

spookly

• Not familiar with the source content, but basing off the infobox image/clothing and such depicted, seems like some Equipment section content might be in order.—spookywilloww^talk 18:52, 16 July 2024 (UTC)
  • Added the section, let me know what you think. AmazinglyCool (talk) 03:33, 26 July 2024 (UTC)

Lew

• Mention of the Galactic Civil War is intro exclusive, if it's not critical might be better to remove altogether Lewisr (talk) 01:57, 31 July 2024 (UTC)
• There's a few dup links to be caught and removed Lewisr (talk) 01:57, 31 July 2024 (UTC)
• I think the part about him speaking several languages should move into a skills/abilities section Lewisr (talk) 01:57, 31 July 2024 (UTC)
• Publisher for the comic should be added Lewisr (talk) 01:57, 31 July 2024 (UTC)
  • Addressed. AmazinglyCool (talk) 20:47, 18 August 2024 (UTC)
    • The language one still needs to be addressed Lewisr (talk) 01:53, 19 August 2024 (UTC)
      • Addressed. AmazinglyCool (talk) 23:10, 28 August 2024 (UTC)

Macaroni

• Please provide links and backup links for all of the Topps cards. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 02:36, 30 August 2024 (UTC)
  • Done, all links added. AmazinglyCool (talk) 01:33, 8 September 2024 (UTC)

Fred strikes back

• You use the phrase "Sand People" without first ever associating it with the Tusken Raiders. A reader might not know they are the same thing. Personally, I'd just stick with "Tusken Raiders" throughout, but you should at least tie the two terms to gether before the first use of "Sand People." Master Fredcerique(talk) (he/him) 16:22, 17 September 2024 (UTC)
  • Done. AmazinglyCool (talk) 18:41, 29 September 2024 (UTC)

Ayrehead

• I don't think we should list an entire species in the affiliations field of the infobox. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:15, 23 September 2024 (UTC)
• I'd say the woman that he meets plays a significant enough role in his story to require an article. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:15, 23 September 2024 (UTC)
  • Done with both. AmazinglyCool (talk) 18:41, 29 September 2024 (UTC)

Comments

• Additional source: "Communiqués" — Star Wars Galaxy Magazine 2 —DKS MaXoO (talk) 10:45, 10 July 2024 (UTC)
  • Thanks, it's added now. AmazinglyCool (talk) 03:33, 26 July 2024 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 21:19, 30 September 2024 (UTC)