Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Taanab Sunrise

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Taanab Sunrise

IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 23:31, April 21, 2013 (UTC)
I was expecting to read about some kind of Far Orbit drink :) Commander Code-8 ^{G'day, mate} 09:29, May 19, 2013 (UTC)
CC7567 ^(talk) 21:01, May 25, 2013 (UTC)
Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 13:37, May 28, 2013 (UTC)
Well done. MasterFred^(Whatever) 03:15, May 30, 2013 (UTC)

~~I don't think you should call the Yuuzhan Vong the "Vong", it's not a proper name for them.~~
~~Article for the other Victory-class that attacked the capital ships?~~ IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 01:38, April 15, 2013 (UTC)
- Both done. Thanks for looking it over. 501st dogma^(talk) 22:34, April 15, 2013 (UTC)

~~I think some context on the operatives, and how they planned to get aboard the Ralroost, can be added.~~
- That better?
~~Class for the Burning Pride? Our article has it as a Miid ro'ik, so check and see if this is accurate.~~ - Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 10:19, May 16, 2013 (UTC)
- I have it as a cruiser now. It seems that there is no mention of it being a Miid ro'ik. 501st dogma^(talk) 20:28, May 16, 2013 (UTC)
  - I believe that Vong vessels designated as "cruisers" or "cruiser analogs" were retroactively given the Miid ro'ik designation by a later sourcebook/essential guide. It's not from the novels, that I know. - Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 13:37, May 28, 2013 (UTC)

~~Could you expand the intro just a tad, maybe by a sentence or two? Perhaps you could provide a few more specifics of the Garqi operation, particularly the operative extraction.~~ CC7567 ^(talk) 20:24, May 25, 2013 (UTC)
- How's that? 501st dogma^(talk) 21:00, May 25, 2013 (UTC)

~~Context on Garqi in the intro and body, please. MasterFred^(Whatever) 15:51, May 29, 2013 (UTC)~~
- Ummmm.. I do give context. It's a planet. 501st dogma^(talk) 19:52, May 29, 2013 (UTC)
  - I mean like where in the galaxy the planet is located. That'd help give the reader a better idea of where this takes place in relation to other things. MasterFred^(Whatever) 20:21, May 29, 2013 (UTC)
    - In that case, added. 501st dogma^(talk) 02:23, May 30, 2013 (UTC)
      - Good enough for me. MasterFred^(Whatever) 03:13, May 30, 2013 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 03:15, May 30, 2013 (UTC)