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TA1313
- Nominated by: Erebus Chronus (Talk) 21:57, 17 August 2022 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: It continues
- WookieeProject (optional): WP:CIS, WP:TCW
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Support
- Fan26 (Talk) 15:13, 19 August 2022 (UTC)
- Samonic
09:36, 20 August 2022 (UTC)
JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 00:39, 21 October 2022 (UTC)
OOM 224 18:51, 18 December 2022 (UTC)
Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:19, 22 December 2022 (UTC)
Object
Macaroni
"TA1313 would also interrupt Dooku's sessions of meditation to deliver reports, which the Count valued as important." -- this is a little misleading: I'm guessing we only know of one instance of it happening, but the "would" makes it sound like a regular thing.- Fixed.
The bts doesn't make it clear if or why the TX-20 identification is an error.JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 03:10, 6 September 2022 (UTC)- Is that good? Erebus Chronus (Talk) 16:07, 9 September 2022 (UTC)
- You should add a ref to Innocents of Ryloth or something so that the reader knows how we know that the two have different plating. Mentioning where the real TX-20 appeared in the bts wouldn't hurt either. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:36, 22 September 2022 (UTC)
- Added a ref. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 17:36, 1 October 2022 (UTC)
- Sorry, I know I implied it was your call with mentioning where TX-20 appeared, but looking at it now I think readers might be confused as to how IOR plays into the whole thing. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 16:13, 2 October 2022 (UTC)
- BRUUHHH (that's not meant to be sassy btw just a response for reasons). Erebus Chronus (Talk) 22:05, 3 October 2022 (UTC)
- Sorry, I know I implied it was your call with mentioning where TX-20 appeared, but looking at it now I think readers might be confused as to how IOR plays into the whole thing. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 16:13, 2 October 2022 (UTC)
- Added a ref. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 17:36, 1 October 2022 (UTC)
- You should add a ref to Innocents of Ryloth or something so that the reader knows how we know that the two have different plating. Mentioning where the real TX-20 appeared in the bts wouldn't hurt either. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:36, 22 September 2022 (UTC)
- Is that good? Erebus Chronus (Talk) 16:07, 9 September 2022 (UTC)
Last thing: please implement {{TCWA}}.JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:34, 20 October 2022 (UTC)- Is that right? Erebus Chronus (Talk) 20:27, 20 October 2022 (UTC)
- Tweaked it a bit but I'm no expert in this particular game. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 00:39, 21 October 2022 (UTC)
- Is that right? Erebus Chronus (Talk) 20:27, 20 October 2022 (UTC)
OOM
Missing {{Mediacat}}OOM 224 12:31, 4 December 2022 (UTC)- Created and added. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 23:39, 9 December 2022 (UTC)
Ayrehead
Is the masculine programming based solely on the voice? If so, then that's something we're moving away from since it doesn't account for non-binary or trans folks.Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:37, 14 December 2022 (UTC)That second paragraph is only one sentence, could you break it up?Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:37, 14 December 2022 (UTC)Based on objections I got on TZ-33, I think we include the old Clone Wars episodes guides as sources still.Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:37, 14 December 2022 (UTC)- All should be addressed. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 00:00, 15 December 2022 (UTC)
Comments
- Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 09:19, 22 December 2022 (UTC)