Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/T7

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The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

Contents

  • 1 T7
    • 1.1 (3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 CC-8
        • 1.1.2.2 Ayrehead
      • 1.1.3 Comments

T7

  • Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 01:15, 20 July 2022 (UTC)
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(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. Fan26 (Talk) 16:21, 3 August 2022 (UTC)
  2. Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 15:29, 26 September 2022 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:22, 21 November 2022 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Commander Code-8 Hello There! 05:24, 23 November 2022 (UTC)
  5. ACvote MasterFredCommerce Guild(talk) (he/him) 09:01, 25 November 2022 (UTC)

Object

CC-8
  • There's enough articles that start with T7 for a disambiguation page Commander Code-8 Hello There! 06:59, 13 November 2022 (UTC)
    • Good call, created. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:14, 13 November 2022 (UTC)
Ayrehead
  • Lightfight currently links to a Legends article, has that term actually been used in canon? Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:36, 18 November 2022 (UTC)
    • Not that I'm aware of, had meant to remove that.
  • Rather then saying the gang formed on Coruscant I'd just say that Dex's Diner is on Coruscant since we don't know that the gang is base there. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:36, 18 November 2022 (UTC)
    • Done.
  • You swap between T7 and tee-seven in the body, I'd stick to one consistently. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:36, 18 November 2022 (UTC)
    • I think it adds a little variation but I don't feel strongly about it, so switched.
  • I think the final sentence currently implies the diner was moaning :P Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:36, 18 November 2022 (UTC)
    • I see what you're saying, but I think the "who" makes it clear that the individual from the previous clause was what was moaning; if it was the diner, it would have been "which." JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 02:45, 20 November 2022 (UTC)
      • I think grammatically it'd still be better to say "The crew collected T7 on their way out of the diner, with the droid still moaning as they left." Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:16, 21 November 2022 (UTC)
        • I think it's fine, but I've reworded it. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:54, 21 November 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 09:01, 25 November 2022 (UTC)