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T7
- Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 01:15, 20 July 2022 (UTC)
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- Fan26 (Talk) 16:21, 3 August 2022 (UTC)
- Samonic
(Talk) 15:29, 26 September 2022 (UTC)
Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:22, 21 November 2022 (UTC)
Commander Code-8 Hello There! 05:24, 23 November 2022 (UTC)
MasterFred(talk) (he/him) 09:01, 25 November 2022 (UTC)
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There's enough articles that start with T7 for a disambiguation pageCommander Code-8 Hello There! 06:59, 13 November 2022 (UTC)- Good call, created. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:14, 13 November 2022 (UTC)
Ayrehead
Lightfight currently links to a Legends article, has that term actually been used in canon?Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:36, 18 November 2022 (UTC)- Not that I'm aware of, had meant to remove that.
Rather then saying the gang formed on Coruscant I'd just say that Dex's Diner is on Coruscant since we don't know that the gang is base there.Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:36, 18 November 2022 (UTC)- Done.
You swap between T7 and tee-seven in the body, I'd stick to one consistently.Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:36, 18 November 2022 (UTC)- I think it adds a little variation but I don't feel strongly about it, so switched.
I think the final sentence currently implies the diner was moaning :PAyrehead02 (talk) 11:36, 18 November 2022 (UTC)- I see what you're saying, but I think the "who" makes it clear that the individual from the previous clause was what was moaning; if it was the diner, it would have been "which." JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 02:45, 20 November 2022 (UTC)
- I think grammatically it'd still be better to say "The crew collected T7 on their way out of the diner, with the droid still moaning as they left." Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:16, 21 November 2022 (UTC)
- I think it's fine, but I've reworded it. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:54, 21 November 2022 (UTC)
- I think grammatically it'd still be better to say "The crew collected T7 on their way out of the diner, with the droid still moaning as they left." Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:16, 21 November 2022 (UTC)
- I see what you're saying, but I think the "who" makes it clear that the individual from the previous clause was what was moaning; if it was the diner, it would have been "which." JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 02:45, 20 November 2022 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 09:01, 25 November 2022 (UTC)