Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Sysco

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Sysco

• Nominated by: Clonehunter^{(Report your W.M.D.)} 00:27, September 15, 2015 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: I'll try to nominate something again. This is something I wrote a while ago for a character I liked simply because he drinks his Dark Jedi troubles away.

(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Ayrehead02 (talk) 02:45, October 31, 2015 (UTC)
2. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:43, November 2, 2015 (UTC)
3. Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 14:50, November 15, 2015 (UTC)
4. Exiled Jedi (talk) 03:54, November 28, 2015 (UTC)
5. 1358 ^(Talk) 01:55, November 29, 2015 (UTC)

Object

Toprawa

• I'm confused by what this is trying to say. One of his "tendons"? Are you trying to refer to his lekku? If so, you should use that terminology instead. "After Rahn severed one of Aseca's tendons..." Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:26, November 1, 2015 (UTC)
  • Tendons attach muscles to bones. It's not stated outright, but it's implied to be a tendon on his foot or his leg. But otherwise it just says "tendon" and Boc falls over after trying to walk. After the conflict the injury isn't mentioned again.--Clonehunter^{(Report your W.M.D.)} 02:33, November 2, 2015 (UTC)
    • I understand what a tendon is, I just found it strange that he swings a lightsaber and only nicks a tendon, so I figured maybe you had meant to say "tendrils" or something in relation to his lekku, but that's fine. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:43, November 2, 2015 (UTC)
      • Ah, just making sure. :P But yah, as much as I like the book, there's a lot of rather vague descriptions and, I suppose, oddities. I guess Rahn was just swinging low. --Clonehunter^{(Report your W.M.D.)} 20:02, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 01:55, November 29, 2015 (UTC)