Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Sutta

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Sutta

• Nominated by: --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 01:06, 14 August 2023 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• Date Archived: 16:06, 24 September 2023 (UTC)
• Final word count: 867 words (136 introduction, 663 body, 68 behind the scenes)
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Support

1. Lewisr (talk) 19:19, 2 September 2023 (UTC)
2. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 22:49, 5 September 2023 (UTC)
3. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 12:04, 6 September 2023 (UTC)
4. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 16:06, 24 September 2023 (UTC)

Object

Lew

• Please amend the date ref so that it includes mention of the destruction of the Sutta. Timelines dates the events of the film to 35 ABY so that will shorten the note
  • Fixed --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 00:12, 15 August 2023 (UTC)
• 2nd paragraph in history is entirely unsourced Lewisr (talk) 20:49, 14 August 2023 (UTC)
  • Whoops, fixed --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 00:12, 15 August 2023 (UTC)
    • I think you'll need a different source for the number of ships in the Citizens' Fleet than the film
      • Fixed --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 02:17, 16 August 2023 (UTC)
• You'll need to delink the gender page from the his pronouns being used Lewisr (talk) 06:39, 15 August 2023 (UTC)
  • Ah yeah. Holdover from previous style of writing --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 02:17, 16 August 2023 (UTC)
• Context for Kijimi in the intro
  • Added --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 04:08, 25 August 2023 (UTC)
• 'One ship of the armada, the Derriphan, was briefly sent out to the wider galaxy and destroy the planet Kijimi. Following its return to the fleet, the Jedi Rey and daughter to Sidious's clone' I think it would be better to include the part about it returning into the same sentence, and Rey should really just be referred to as Sidious' granddaughter Lewisr (talk) 15:14, 17 August 2023 (UTC)
  • Fixed --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 04:08, 25 August 2023 (UTC)
• I think it's worth including mention of Strok in the history section Lewisr (talk) 16:40, 27 August 2023 (UTC)
  • Added --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 03:12, 28 August 2023 (UTC)
• The first image in history doesn't really fit with what the informations it's alongside talks about, it might be better to use an image of the fleet itself or something a bit more relevant to what's being talked about? Lewisr (talk) 16:43, 28 August 2023 (UTC)
  • Swapped with a fleet shot --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 18:42, 2 September 2023 (UTC)

Anil

• Orbital bombardment is infobox-exclusive. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 20:12, 15 August 2023 (UTC)
  • Added! --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 02:17, 16 August 2023 (UTC)
• The intro explains it pretty well, but I think the History section doesn't make it clear that the Final Order fleet was part of the Sith Eternal led by Sidious. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 13:57, 4 September 2023 (UTC)
  • Reworded --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 14:45, 9 September 2023 (UTC)
• Have you checked all book and comic adaptations for a possible appearance? The Screen Comix one was missing from the list, for example. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 16:02, 9 September 2023 (UTC)
  • I'm still combing through them --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 15:46, 16 September 2023 (UTC)
    • I haven't found any further appearances. Already crossed most of these when creating the article a while back, and double checked. --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 15:29, 24 September 2023 (UTC)
      • Thanks for double-checking! Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 16:06, 24 September 2023 (UTC)

spookly

• Would like to see that ABY date worked into the intro.
  • Added --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 04:09, 25 August 2023 (UTC)
• (Small) amount of context needed for Millennium Falcon.—spookywilloww^talk 18:57, 21 August 2023 (UTC)
  • Added --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 04:09, 25 August 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 16:06, 24 September 2023 (UTC)