Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Superior

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Superior

  • Nominated by: 501st dogma(talk) 23:13, April 26, 2014 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Completely and utterly canon. EU FTW

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. I hope ships are all female in English too. If not so, please change it. Clone Commander Lee Talk 20:58, April 29, 2014 (UTC)
    • Ya, they are. I usually don't refer to them as such, but I'll leave it as is. 501st dogma(talk) 22:39, April 29, 2014 (UTC)
      • On second thought, I've changed "her" to "its." The Superior is never referred to as female, so I'm just going to go with "its." 501st dogma(talk) 17:21, May 2, 2014 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 20:49, May 7, 2014 (UTC)
  3. Commander Code-8 Felicitations malefactors! 08:39, May 28, 2014 (UTC)
  4. ACvote grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 11:11, June 7, 2014 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 00:40, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

Object

Lee's charge
  • Fighting alongside the Star Destroyer Chimaera over a gas giant in the star system, the Superior was ravaged by the attacks of Yuuzhan Vong starships, and the Star Destroyer's wreck was lost as it fell into the gas giant's atmosphere.: The wreck of the Superior or the Chimaera?
  • I don't believe that we can source the year to the novel.
  • Nice. Clone Commander Lee Talk 23:34, April 26, 2014 (UTC)
    • Both done. Thanks for the review. 501st dogma(talk) 11:08, April 29, 2014 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • For reference 1, since the Superior is not literally mentioned in Warfare, I find it's better in these instances to leave a small note in the reference specifying that, for example, this information is based on standard Imperial-class Star Destroyer specs.
  • The infobox should utilize the "role" field and the "firstsight" field. Role can specify "Warship."
    • Done. I put the first sight as 28 ABY, but it seems like Mara's seen it before due to the quote, so should it be prior to 28 ABY instead?
      • I don't know the source material. Your understanding is better than mine. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:01, June 8, 2014 (UTC)
        • She could have seen it early that year, so I'll keep 28 ABY as the earliest confirmed date.
  • Is "Battle of Bastion" a formal canon title?
    • I remember it being mentioned as such, and since Cade went through all the NJO battles looking for conjectural titles and the Battle of Bastion does not have the template, it seems so
  • Is this sentence really necessary? It seems like extraneous detail not really pertinent to the Superior's details: "Pellaeon was also transported aboard that frigate after the Grand Admiral was gravely wounded aboard the Chimaera by the enemy assault." Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 01:26, June 4, 2014 (UTC)
    • Well, Pellaeon was aboard the frigate that used the Superior's remains to get to safety, so it's sort of notable that way. I can remove it if you like though. Thanks for looking it over. 501st dogma(talk) 12:40, June 6, 2014 (UTC)
      • Yeah, that really has less to do with the Superior itself and more to do with what happens with its passengers after they leave the Star Destroyer. I'd recommend cutting it. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:01, June 8, 2014 (UTC)
        • Killed it. 501st dogma(talk) 00:31, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 00:40, June 9, 2014 (UTC)