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Sterling

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Support

  1. ACvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 02:45, 31 January 2022 (UTC)
  2. ACvote OOM 224 10:12, 20 February 2022 (UTC)
  3. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 11:47, 20 February 2022 (UTC)
  4. Assuming the disambiguation page gets created, nice work! LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 14:06, 27 February 2022 (UTC)
  5. ACvote MasterFredCommerce Guild(talk) 06:30, 28 February 2022 (UTC)

Object

Fan
  • In the P&T, I don't think it's neccesary to restate that Fett is a human male.
  • Also from the P&T "He then reached out and grabbed her arm as he emphasized that Maul had taken Jesse captive." This feels like it belongs in the bio tbh, it's describing an action he did, not a personality trait. Fan26 (Talk) 16:00, 18 January 2022 (UTC)
OOM
  • My edit: particular things you'll want to take note of is the formatting in the intro and in the Quote template
  • For that Databank ref, you can simplify it using Waxer/Legends's old Databank ref as an example.
  • The same Databank ref note doesn't mention context for the Clone Wars, so it can't be used to cite the context for the war in the Biography.
  • Sundari in the intro needs some context, as does Kamino in the body.
  • The 332nd Division should be named in the Biography section so readers would know that that's his division when you name it in the Equipment section.
  • Per Silver Angel, a date should be provided for the preview clip.
  • &#124; should now be used instead of <nowiki>|</nowiki> OOM 224 15:43, 28 January 2022 (UTC)
  • For Sundari's context in the intro, I'm more so concerned about where it's located, i.e. on the planet Mandalore, rather than it being a capital city.
  • Image captions should have a full stop/period at the end if it's a complete sentence, and underscores "_" should replace spaces in the file name.
  • "In the final days of the Clone Wars in 19 BBY, a galactic-wide conflict between the Galactic Republic and the Confederacy of Independent Systems" — dangling participle here.
  • The entire phrase "Republic forces" should be pipelinked to the Grand Army of the Republic, not just "Republic." OOM 224 08:20, 29 January 2022 (UTC)
  • Oh something I missed: it seems like a Sterling (disambiguation) page is in order OOM 224 10:15, 20 February 2022 (UTC)
  • Just saw this. Added. Corellian PremierRogue SquadronMTFBWY 15:10, 27 February 2022 (UTC)
Macaroni
  • Ref five can use {{Disney}}, with "dmedmedia" as the subdomain.
  • In tandem with OOM's objection, the way that the video was released (the official SW YT channel) should be mentioned. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 23:55, 28 January 2022 (UTC)
  • Last thing (I think): since Tano is a former Jedi, how would her being addressed as a Jedi rank of commander befit her status? JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 03:48, 30 January 2022 (UTC)
  • I was wrong :P There's definitely another quote that can be added for the P+T, maybe one about Jesse. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 01:49, 31 January 2022 (UTC)
Fred strikes back
  • Only one minor thing: I feel like "Siege of Mandalore" should be fully name-dropped in the body, not just pipelinked. MasterFredCommerce Guild(talk) 23:57, 22 February 2022 (UTC)
Luca
  • I'd mention the Grand Army of the Republic in the first intro sentence. Maybe something like this: "Sterling" was the nickname of a clone trooper of the 332nd Division within the 501st Legion of the Grand Army of the Republic, who took part…"
  • 501st Legion is intro-exclusive. LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 10:48, 27 February 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 06:30, 28 February 2022 (UTC)