- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Squawk
- Nominated by: Thefourdotelipsis 01:11, June 28, 2010 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Guest nom for WP:TCW.
(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)
Support
Nice clone. JangFett (Talk) 01:22, July 7, 2010 (UTC)- Good stuff. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 17:06, July 9, 2010 (UTC)
- Looks good to me.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 09:32, July 13, 2010 (UTC)
- Chack Jadson (Talk) 14:30, July 18, 2010 (UTC)
Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 07:40, July 28, 2010 (UTC)
Object
Jujiggum
"Shortly after the cloud was skies were cleared…" Huh? Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 22:16, July 8, 2010 (UTC)- Hmm. Gibberish. I do that a lot. Fixed now. Thefourdotelipsis 02:45, July 9, 2010 (UTC)
What has two thumbs and hates Todd Packer?
Why did Argente buying Ukio render the Republic's defenses moot?- Tried to explain that a little better.
- This guy. Chack Jadson (Talk) 22:00, July 13, 2010 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. Thefourdotelipsis 01:14, July 14, 2010 (UTC)
Cav-Man
Ganch oversaw the process, and as he instructed Squawk and his use their honed muscles to raise the dam, Not sure what you mean here. Missing word perhaps?- Fixed.
Eventually, the sky was blacked out by agents of the Confederacy, but the issue was alleviated by a brief opening of the shield by the Ukian liege. How so? Also, this just seems to be dropped in at the end of the paragraph with no connection to the preceding events.- Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 10:37, July 20, 2010 (UTC)
- Hopefully it's a bit clearer now. It's just context that isn't directly relevant to Squawk. Thefourdotelipsis 01:07, July 21, 2010 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 07:44, July 28, 2010 (UTC)