Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Spine dragon/Legends

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Spine dragon

• Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:17, September 4, 2013 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: CA which is over 250 words due to new info from SWTOR

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 03:45, September 7, 2013 (UTC)
2. Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 20:57, September 23, 2013 (UTC)
3. Assuming CC's objections are complied with. Winterz (talk) 15:57, October 15, 2013 (UTC)
4. CC7567 ^(talk) 14:11, October 18, 2013 (UTC)
5. Thefourdotelipsis (talk) 05:30, October 21, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Exiled Jedi

1. • I think that you should add a sentence about the Spine Dragon of M'dweshuu to the introduction.
     • Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:41, September 4, 2013 (UTC)
   • Please create an article for the infobox redlink.
     • Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:41, September 4, 2013 (UTC)
   • In the history section, shouldn't you mention the extinction after mentioning that the Jedi killed one?
     • Oh that;s a very good point I hadn't thought of that. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:41, September 4, 2013 (UTC)
   • Could you provide a rough timeframe for the Corellia Antilles information in the article?
     • Added it was during the New Republic era. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:41, September 4, 2013 (UTC)
   • I think you should mention the The Old Republic in the Behind the scenes section.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 17:28, September 4, 2013 (UTC)
     • Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:41, September 4, 2013 (UTC)

Cav

• What is the capitalization of "Spine Dragon of M'dweshuu"? The quote has it with the D in Dragon capitalized, but the linked article is lower case. - Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 09:40, September 11, 2013 (UTC)
  • Should be capital which I believe it is throughout now. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:30, September 11, 2013 (UTC)

Attack of the Clone

• In the intro, some minor context for the Nikto (perhaps as the dominant species on Kintan, or whatever they were) would be helpful.
  • Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:20, October 18, 2013 (UTC)
• For ref 3, please use the proper formatting for the Essential Atlas Online Companion (with {{SW}}). (You can see here for an arbitrary example of it.) CC7567 ^(talk) 19:30, September 28, 2013 (UTC)
  • Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:20, October 18, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 06:29, October 21, 2013 (UTC)