Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Soup People

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Contents

  • 1 Soup People
    • 1.1 (3 ACs/4 Users/7 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 501st
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Soup People

  • Nominated by: Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 04:03, July 5, 2012 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: One of the silliest canon subjects ever…The Soup People of Tureen VI!

(3 ACs/4 Users/7 Total)

Support

  1. I did a copy-edit and tweaked a few sentences for better flow. Looks good. Though, I have to wonder, if the Soup People are annoyed, do they say "NO SOUP FOR YOU!" Trak Nar Ramble on 04:11, July 5, 2012 (UTC)
  2. —Jedi Kasra (comlink) 05:28, July 5, 2012 (UTC)
  3. ~SavageBOB sig 10:50, July 5, 2012 (UTC)
  4. 501st dogma(talk) 17:34, July 5, 2012 (UTC)
  5. ACvote—Cal JediInfinite Empire (Personal Comm Channel) 19:43, July 5, 2012 (UTC)
  6. ACvote Clangers. - Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 13:40, July 9, 2012 (UTC)
  7. ACvote CC7567 (talk) 04:59, July 18, 2012 (UTC)

Object

501st
  • "Prior to the 19 BBY destruction of the CoCo Town, Coruscant restaurant, Dex's Diner, the Besalisk owner of the diner, Dexter Jettster, claimed in his menu that he served soup of the same quality of the Soup People's." This needs to be reworded as it's not grammaticaly correct. The bolded part above is the issue.
    • Better?--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 17:26, July 5, 2012 (UTC)
  • Looks good otherwise. 501st dogma(talk) 16:46, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 04:59, July 18, 2012 (UTC)


  • I think I got every piece of relavent information from the Atlas.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 04:03, July 5, 2012 (UTC)