- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Sora Mobari
- Nominated by: Clone Commander Lee Talk 23:01, May 31, 2014 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Ah, the good old days, when the Clone Wars were full of good stories. Easy one.
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Support
- Corellian Premier
The Force will be with you always 02:32, June 1, 2014 (UTC) - 501st dogma(talk) 15:17, June 1, 2014 (UTC)
Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 07:53, June 20, 2014 (UTC)- Exiled Jedi
(Greetings) 17:31, July 1, 2014 (UTC) - Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:20, July 7, 2014 (UTC)
- IFYLOFD (Enter the Floydome) 01:25, July 14, 2014 (UTC)
- Great job. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 21:41, July 15, 2014 (UTC)
- JangFett (Talk) 00:17, July 18, 2014 (UTC)
Object
Jangeth
Since it's rather important to note, could you mention that Evan-Ott turned to the dark side or something to-the-point in the intro? His introduction in the intro would read better and it won't sound like he randomly hated her for no reason.Also, did the comic (or some source) mention why he fell to the dark side? JangFett (Talk) 00:42, July 4, 2014 (UTC)- On a word for word source check, I have to admit that it isn't even spelled out that he did fall to the dark side. Removed all mention of it from this article and Evan-Ott's. It is still pretty likely, but not confirmed. Clone Commander Lee Talk 10:37, July 4, 2014 (UTC)
- Okay, but could you check your wording here: How can you murder someone in an explosion? JangFett (Talk) 00:19, July 14, 2014 (UTC)
- Replaced "in" with "during" as we don't know if he did cause it himself. Clone Commander Lee Talk 09:54, July 14, 2014 (UTC)
- I strongly disagree with this change. Not only is "in an explosion" better syntax than "during an explosion," but it's also what CSWE says: "...[her Padawan] planned to kill her in an explosion." This should be changed back. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 05:19, July 15, 2014 (UTC)
- I agree with Tope. If you agree, Jang, I'll undo this edit. Clone Commander Lee Talk 09:24, July 15, 2014 (UTC)
- I strongly disagree with this change. Not only is "in an explosion" better syntax than "during an explosion," but it's also what CSWE says: "...[her Padawan] planned to kill her in an explosion." This should be changed back. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 05:19, July 15, 2014 (UTC)
- Replaced "in" with "during" as we don't know if he did cause it himself. Clone Commander Lee Talk 09:54, July 14, 2014 (UTC)
- Okay, but could you check your wording here: How can you murder someone in an explosion? JangFett (Talk) 00:19, July 14, 2014 (UTC)
- On a word for word source check, I have to admit that it isn't even spelled out that he did fall to the dark side. Removed all mention of it from this article and Evan-Ott's. It is still pretty likely, but not confirmed. Clone Commander Lee Talk 10:37, July 4, 2014 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 00:25, July 18, 2014 (UTC)