Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Skirmish at Carkoon

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Battle of the Great Pit of Carkoon

(+8)

Support

  1. Chack Jadson Talk 13:54, 22 August 2007 (UTC)
  2. Good work. Jediknight19bby (Jedi High Council Chambers!) 19:22, 22 August 2007 (UTC)
  3. Now that I gave it a decent overhaul, properly arranged images according to the WP:MOS. JMAS 23:57, 22 August 2007 (UTC)
  4. Thefourdotelipsis 01:30, 25 August 2007 (UTC)
  5. Greyman(Paratus) 02:11, 25 August 2007 (UTC)
  6. Don't see why not. Unit 8311 12:01, 25 August 2007 (UTC)
  7. Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 13:58, 25 August 2007 (UTC)
  8. Imperialles 13:18, 31 August 2007 (UTC)

Oppose

    • Could use some sources for a couple of the dead guys, only a handful are sourced, also could use an image of dead Jabba, where his tounge is sticking out after Leia killed him. Other than that, looks great. Jediknight19bby (Jedi High Council Chambers!) 16:13, 22 August 2007 (UTC)
    • It's not actually a part of the Galactic Civil War. Thefourdotelipsis 02:18, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
      • It is, they were rescuing Han from Jabba, and the Imperials were the ones that froze him in the first place. It's indirectly a battle of the Galactic Civil War. Jediknight19bby (Jedi High Council Chambers) 14:14, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
        • I'd say Fourdot's right. How it's look now? Chack Jadson Talk 15:04, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
          • Fourdot is right. Hence why I created Rescue of Han Solo and put that in the place of Fourdots objection. - JMAS 16:24, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
  2. Just a few things with regards to reference tags: The first paragraph of "The Battle" needs to sourced. And in the "Aftermath" section the first three paragraphs need references as well. Otherwise, it looks good. Cheers, Greyman(Paratus) 01:16, 25 August 2007 (UTC)
    • Done. - JMAS 01:50, 25 August 2007 (UTC)
  • Redundant internal links in several quotes. These should be removed per WP:MOS (Criteria 1.c). --Imperialles 19:25, 30 August 2007 (UTC)
  1. Could mention Hermi Odle and Pote Snitkin shooting at each other. -- AckbarSigdmirableAckbar (It's A Trap!) 20:03, 2 September 2007 (UTC)

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