Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Skine sector/Legends

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Skine sector

  • Nominated by: --Eyrezer 09:13, 4 May 2009 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Not quite so funny

(3 ACs/3 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. My objections were the same as CC's, and it was caught in an edit conflict. I'll cast my vote assuming those objections are addressed. Jonjedigrandmaster (Jedi beacon) 22:00, 4 May 2009 (UTC)
  2. CC7567 (talk) 04:19, 5 May 2009 (UTC)
  3. SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is the truth) 06:18, 7 May 2009 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Graestan(Talk) 18:33, 10 May 2009 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Good read, Eyrezer. Cylka-talk- 06:28, 14 May 2009 (UTC)
  6. ACvote Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 10:16, 14 May 2009 (UTC)

Object

  1. Attack of the Clone
    • First sentence: it sounds strange and choppy mentioning where it was without mentioning what it was in the same sentence. Please change if possible.
    • "carrying aboard a renowned Balved Sculpture also known as the Veil of Skynara": so was it known as a "renowned sculpture" and by its name? Sounds strange; please check.
    • Looks fine otherwise. CC7567 (talk) 21:56, 4 May 2009 (UTC)
      • Should both be fixed. Also known was meant to refer to the fact the sculpture and ship shared the same name. Hopefully fixed. Cheers for the review. --Eyrezer 03:00, 5 May 2009 (UTC)
        • Ah, didn't notice they had the same name. CC7567 (talk) 04:19, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

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