Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Sister

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Sister

• Nominated by: —spookywilloww^talk 14:59, 23 April 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:NOVELS; WP:PRIDE

(3 ACs/4 Users/7 Total)

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Support

1. Very well done.— Samonic 07:07, 26 April 2022 (UTC)
2. Fantastic work. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 10:09, 29 April 2022 (UTC)
3. Beautiful work. I'm so excited to see her shine through your work. Go Spooky! NBDani (talk) 01:00, 3 May 2022 (UTC) NBDani (talk) 19:46, 9 June 2022 (UTC)
4. Very proud of this article, even prouder to see this become a good article. Great work. --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 19:37, 3 May 2022 (UTC)
5. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 22:04, 5 May 2022 (UTC)
6. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 12:05, 10 June 2022 (UTC)
7. Very pleased to see this raised to status so soon after the character was introduced. Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:37, 22 June 2022 (UTC)

Object

Braha

• Context needed for 7th Sky Corps in both instances. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 15:14, 23 April 2022 (UTC)
  • Objection contested via Discord. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 18:09, 23 April 2022 (UTC)

Fan stans our trans trooper queen

• Just wanna make sure you're cool with this copy-edit. Fan26 (Talk) 17:14, 23 April 2022 (UTC)
  • Yep thanks.—spookywilloww^talk 20:55, 23 April 2022 (UTC)

Dani

• "Saddened by the deaths resulting from the battle, Sister arranged the helmets of her fallen comrades beneath a tree as a memorial." Should this specify it was clone deaths, or even specifically her brothers, since there were nonClones in the army? NBDani (talk) 15:32, 29 April 2022 (UTC)
• Should we specify Jango as a male? NBDani (talk) 15:32, 29 April 2022 (UTC)
  • Added the two above.—spookywilloww^talk 23:58, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
• For the BTS, should drawing of Sticks be linked to the art in question? See Lando's BTS, 5th para, for an example. NBDani (talk) 15:32, 29 April 2022 (UTC)
  • It's an interesting concept - but is there SA precedent for linking to images in body text? It seems a bit odd to me quite honestly, more of a thing that has little relevance to Sister in this case when it'd be covered in the other character's Behind the scenes.—spookywilloww^talk 23:58, 2 May 2022 (UTC)

CC-8

• I think it'd be worth adding to the Bts that Brotherhood portrays her with braided hair in line with the unofficial artwork
• The release month for Queen's Hope should be given, since you're discussing two sources from the same year Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 00:39, 4 June 2022 (UTC)
  • Addressed both —spookywilloww^talk 02:29, 9 June 2022 (UTC)

Comments

• More a suggestion than an objection as I think it's fine either way - The intro quote feels like a retelling of history and I think belongs in Biography and the Biography quote feels more of a quote that capture's her identity, something I feel belongs in the Intro. What are your thoughts on switching the two? NBDani (talk) 15:36, 23 April 2022 (UTC)
  • True enough, swapped.—spookywilloww^talk 20:55, 23 April 2022 (UTC)
• The page will need updating per Brotherhood Lewisr (talk) 17:40, 10 May 2022 (UTC)
  • Update complete.—spookywilloww^talk 13:31, 12 May 2022 (UTC)
• Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 15:37, 22 June 2022 (UTC)