Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Sindra

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Sindra

  • Nominated by:—Tommy 9281 Mechnochair-NEGWT (Mechno-chair) 02:54, February 5, 2010 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Twin sister and supporting nom to the gentleman above.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. Nayayen—TALK 20:48, February 7, 2010 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Chack Jadson (Talk) 15:29, February 11, 2010 (UTC)
  3. SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is a lie) 15:13, February 12, 2010 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir 06:00, March 5, 2010 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Jonjedigrandmaster Jedi symbol (We seed the stars) 20:11, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

Object

  1. Nayayen
    • In the intro, "She taunted him after knocking him to the ground". It isn't that clear who you are referring to here at first.
      • Addressed.
    • What do you mean by "Force examination"?
      • Addressed.
    • "Sindra refused the offer . . . allowed Xash to duel him first." The clause at the end of this sentence doesn't make sense at the moment.
      • Reworked it slightly, see how it looks now.
    • The last sentence in the Bts seems rather irrelevant, is it really needed?
      • That was added based on some IRC objections I went through with an Inq for Thannor Keth, who felt that the information was relevant. Because Sindra is from the same story, I added it to her BtS as well.—Tommy 9281 Mechnochair-NEGWT (Mechno-chair) 20:28, February 7, 2010 (UTC)
    • Otherwise good. Just the sort of character I'd have thought you'd get around to at some point. Nayayen—TALK 20:05, February 7, 2010 (UTC)
      • Really, why is that? Thanks for the review, Nayayen, please advise if anything further is required.
        • You've promoted a fair few Sith-related articles so this wouldn't be an unusual article for you to write, I guess. Nayayen—TALK 20:48, February 7, 2010 (UTC)
          • Ahh, I've become predictable. I see it's time to switch up my style :P—Tommy 9281 Mechnochair-NEGWT (Mechno-chair) 20:49, February 7, 2010 (UTC)
  2. Soresu
    • Just one: Could the quote descriptions be, well, more descriptive? You pretty much state the speakers, but provide no context/description beyond that. SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is a lie) 12:57, February 12, 2010 (UTC)
      • Addressed. Thank you for the review, Soresu. Please advise if anything further is required.—Tommy 9281 Mechnochair-NEGWT (Mechno-chair) 14:58, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 20:11, March 5, 2010 (UTC)