Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Shettora's criminal faction

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Shettora's criminal faction

• Nominated by: 501st dogma^(talk) 21:40, May 8, 2013 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: For the Barn Burner

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. IFYLOFD ^{(Enter the Floydome)} 00:03, May 18, 2013 (UTC)
2. Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 08:17, June 3, 2013 (UTC)
3. How can they be criminals if they sell decent merchandise? Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 02:18, June 8, 2013 (UTC)
4. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 02:05, June 9, 2013 (UTC)
5. Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:23, June 9, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Floyd

• Linking issues.
  • Could you specify? Is it underlinking issues? If so, I found two articles that hadn't been linked yet.
    • It was underlinking, and you seem to have taken care of it. IFYLOFD ^{(Enter the Floydome)} 00:03, May 18, 2013 (UTC)
• I really don't like the way you introduce the faction in the intro, it's pretty clumsy. Something like "Around 0 ABY, the Hutt Shettora ran a criminal faction..." would be a lot better. IFYLOFD ^{(Enter the Floydome)} 05:01, May 17, 2013 (UTC)
  • Done. Thanks for looking it over. 501st dogma^(talk) 20:42, May 17, 2013 (UTC)

Cav

• Given the definition of the word "beachhead", is it the correct term to use in context for Puullo's position? - Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 10:58, May 29, 2013 (UTC)
  • I used it because the book used it like this: ...the "beachhead" of Shettora's organization.... I didn't quite know what they meant, so I just said what they said. 501st dogma^(talk) 11:41, May 29, 2013 (UTC)
    • Strange use of the word, but since the source uses it ... /shrug/ - Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 08:17, June 3, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 22:04, June 9, 2013 (UTC)