Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Sheeka Tull's sister

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Sheeka Tull's sister

• Nominated by: --Eyrezer 07:45, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Lol, yes--Skippy Farlstendoiro 08:00, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
2. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 09:17, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
3. Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 09:44, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
4. We need a conjecture article about someone's mom to become a GA. Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 21:07, 23 January 2009 (UTC)
   • Lol - Sheeka Tull's mother? --Eyrezer 23:41, 23 January 2009 (UTC)
5. Toprawa and Ralltiir 00:39, 24 January 2009 (UTC)

Object

1. • {{Conjecture}}
   • Would it be better to have an opening sentence like this? Sheeka Tull's sister was a Human female who lived on the Outer Rim Territories planet Atrivis 7 in the later years of the Galactic Republic. It brings in gender, species, and the bold corresponds with the article name.
   • Was the religion said to be a cult? If not, I would suggest just using sect instead. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 08:40, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
     • All fixed. Thanks for pointing out I forgot to mention the Human bit. --Eyrezer 09:12, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
2. Chack Attack:
   • "despite it later exposing Sheeka to combat in the lead up to the Clone Wars" This sentence doesn't flow great. I had to read it a couple of times to get the meaning.
     • Hopefully clarified.
   • Also, any chance she's mentioned in CSWE? Perhaps in Sheeka's entry, assuming she has one. Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 02:01, 23 January 2009 (UTC)
     • I actually independently checked CSWE in the store yesterday, and Sheeka didn't even get an entry.

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 00:39, 24 January 2009 (UTC)