Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Shari

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Shari

• Nominated by: User:Spookywilloww/Sig2 03:10, October 13, 2019 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: another farmer :P

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 04:27, October 19, 2019 (UTC)
2. Fan26 (Talk) 22:31, October 20, 2019 (UTC)
3. Very nice work! MasterFred^(Whatever) 02:02, November 4, 2019 (UTC)
4. Doctor Starwars^Talk 02:04, November 4, 2019 (UTC)
5. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 04:30, November 5, 2019 (UTC)

Object

Anil

• I think you can add some more details about Shari's interactions with Rakab and Garsea, like Shari turning red when Rakab talked about that grandparents thing, or Garsea saying that if she did stay on Batuu, it'd be good to know she would have a friend there, and the girl's reaction to that etc.
• I believe there is enough room for one image, similar to Jac Lodain.
• "Shari became angered when Jac Lodain brusquely dismissed a suggestion she made." I might be missing something, but as far as I can see, Shari got angry after Lodain mentioned of her grandparents, not just after dismissing her suggestion. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 12:43, October 16, 2019 (UTC)
  • Got the three.User:Spookywilloww/Sig2 20:45, October 16, 2019 (UTC)
    • For that third objection, could you please briefly mention that in the P&T as well? It's still the same sentence there.
      • Got that.User:Spookywilloww/Sig2 17:48, October 17, 2019 (UTC)
• I might be wrong, but I think the novel mentions that Garsea's skin was golden. If that's the case, you can add that to the P&T as "one shade darker than Garsea's golden skin" or something like that. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 14:38, October 17, 2019 (UTC)
  • Added User:Spookywilloww/Sig2 17:48, October 17, 2019 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 04:30, November 5, 2019 (UTC)