Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Shapers of Kro Var

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Shapers of Kro Var

  • Nominated by: Atarumaster88 Jedi Order (Talk page) 19:20, 14 July 2009 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: 928 words, by my count.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. Interesting. SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is a lie) 23:13, 15 July 2009 (UTC)
  2. I wish there were some quotes available, but there's not. Oh well... —Master Jonathan(Jedi Council Chambers) 18:04, 17 July 2009 (UTC)
  3. ACvote CC7567 (talk) 00:47, 19 July 2009 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Jonjedigrandmaster (Jedi Beacon) 20:14, 22 July 2009 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 08:32, 29 July 2009 (UTC)

Object

  1. Soresu
    • Peace was eventually restored and the Jedi decided that the Shapers weren't users of the dark side of the Force, and so sent envoys to monitor the Shapers and to learn their Force techniques. Break this up. 3 ands is a little bit too much for me.
    • their distrust of both technology, but also Force powers that were unseen. Both is not compatible with but. It should be either their distrust of both technology and Force powers that were unseen or their distrust of not only technology, but also Force powers that were unseen, or something like that.
    • determine which area of elemental control they possessed the most control. Repetition of control. SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is the truth) 09:06, 15 July 2009 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 08:32, 29 July 2009 (UTC)